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allthingsdecent

Two Heads

Jul 21, 2011 16:16

So this is actually two ideas of mine merged into one: Cuddy and House in couples therapy (!) and yet another take on Moving On.

Here's the premise: What if Moving On was exactly the same, except for three things:
a. Cuddy didn't go out with that dweeb. (Because. . .really Cuddy?)
b. House brought the brush over by himself. (No Wilson waiting in the ( Read more... )

huddy, house, fan fiction, endgame, cuddy

Comments 33

zanilou July 26 2011, 02:45:59 UTC

Definite tears in my eyes as I read certain parts of this. Shipping this couple is hard on the heart. Haha.

And I loved the Sarah Palin reference! I LOL-ed forever.d

Thanks for writing! As always, it was a pleasure to read.

allthingsdecent July 26 2011, 12:17:31 UTC

Ugh, I totally cried while writing it!

Glad you liked the Sarah Palin joke. . . The role reversal is my favorite part of this fic!!

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allthingsdecent July 26 2011, 14:29:50 UTC

Thanks, bb!

valespince July 26 2011, 14:29:23 UTC

Oh my god, this was GREAT. DOESN'T SUCK, AT ALL.
I kinda wish it was not a one shot. Damn I have to go out right now and my eyes are all teary, I will comment a bit longer when I came back 'cause I really loved it :)

allthingsdecent July 26 2011, 14:33:31 UTC

Awwww, thanks. I stressed about this fic a little so I really appreciate that!
(I have a new light-hearted one that I just posted, too, if you're in the mood.)

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allthingsdecent July 26 2011, 18:44:31 UTC

LOL! You don't quit, do you, girl? :D (But glad you liked it.)

flippet July 26 2011, 19:49:17 UTC

How did I miss this until now? (Ignoring that I have a phone-only on the weekends, and have to work during the week. Ugh.)

This was fabulous, lady!

Your House, especially, is quite in-character, there was really only one spot that felt a little 'off' to me (“Christ, do I really sound like that?” House asked. - would House say 'Christ', first off...I'm not sure he would, but then, it is hard to come up with a good interjection that isn't that - and it seemed a bit too 'honestly asking' a) for House in general, and b) at that point.)

I do love how you have House drop his defenses, though - he does do that, sometimes rather unexpectedly, and man is he heartbreaking when he does. The roleplaying was a fabulous way to do that ( ... )

allthingsdecent July 26 2011, 20:09:42 UTC

Yeah, I figure Cuddy would call House "House" so Ivy would be used to hearing it like that.
(Plus, it was weird enough having Cuddy be "Lisa" throughout this fic. Greg would just be too much!! I couldn't deal.)

The "Christ, do I really sound like that?" part . .. I can hear it in my head. (Kinda.) He was sort of teasing her. I think part of House thought it was cute that she was imitating him like that.

And yes! SecretlyVulnerable!House is my favorite House of all. He makes an appearance in all of my fictions.

Anyway, thanks for reading, critiquing, general fabulousness.
:D