Fic: KHR! - Kinetic

[amcw177]

Title: Kinetic

Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn
Pairing: X18 - Xanxus/Hibari
Genre: PWP
Rating: NC-17, in every possible way
Word count: 3,900
Disclaimer: Amano Akira owns these two and the series, I don't. No money made.
Prompt: written for the 2nd round at khrfest; VII - 67. X18 - clash; "when the two sadists collide... in bed"
Beta: kentucka wrestled with this

Comments

/purrs

[lampazo_libre]

Okay, I don’t think I would have dare to read the pairing if it weren’t for you. But I did, and I APPROVE SO MUCH!!!!
Fuck, this was awesome.
It all fits like it should, I completely believed you, and I’m tempted to shower you in golden stars for making both Hibari and Xanxus so ridiculously IC. \o/
I must admit, I was giggling amusedly all the way while reading, and interrupted the process in the middle to make a beeline to the kitchen for some yogurt, to accompany the further reading. Does it count as a twisted reaction? I honestly don’t know.
I can quote my favorite lines, but there are, ugh, too many. Fuck.
Also, a bonus Oscar to you for not-there-but-his spirit-is-mourning-for-his-garden Lussuria. I love Sister Luss to bits, and you have attached him so smoothly here.. he’s like the last gem.
Anyway, I liked it. Even more the foreplay than the whole smut, actually, and of course, Hibari’s last blast with Scotch.
Thank you!\o/

Re: /purrs

[amcw177]

Oho! I feel incredibly honoured that you gave it a try, bb! *huggles you* I realise the pairing is... well, let's say rare for lack of a better word. And there's obviously a reason for that.

But I am incapable of writing fluff anyway so I might as well stick to violence and crack ROFL

LOL Actually, nope. I think that's perfectly normal. I was eating chocolate while writing this. To compensate for the lack of 'nice', apparently XD

I am so happy that you liked it, dear! And thanks so very much for reading it, despite it being a rather heavy pairing to stomach ♥

[nancheon]

Thanks to you and your fic I've come to like a new pairing - seriously, it was so well written and I really could them imaging doing this.
Keep up the work! I hope you'll write more X18 fics in the future ;)

[amcw177]

LOL Actually, the easiest answer to the prompt would have been one sentence: 'The world implodes.' :D

But I'm incredibly happy that you liked the, well, more detailed version of mine too ;) Thank you so very much for venturing to read this! It's a really rare and somewhat odd pairing, so I'm doubly honoroued that you gave it a try ♥

HAHA I would gladly rectify the lack of X18 in this world but I'm afraid this one already broke my brain XD but who knows. Miracles do happen, I hear LOL

[bandanability]

I came.
Seriously, that was absolutely amazing and SO in character and gorgeous and DAHHHH sorry, still can't talk.

[amcw177]

Then that makes three LOL My quota for the day is fulfilled *iz proud*

Nah, seriously, thanks a million for giving this fic a chance :) I know the pairing is a little unusual and maybe not for the weak of heart. But I'm glad to hear that they were somewhat IC.

So, thanks very much for reading and commenting and I'm happy you enjoyed it!

I OWE YOU SOME CHILDREN

[dame_batsie]

I wish I could say I was the original requester, but I can't. This is beyond awesome. I love obscure pairings more than ice cream, and you did a magnificent job in keeping their personalities intact. Violent couple to the extreme, yes, they are.

And the sex was hot. ♥

Not too good with kids but I accept cookies instead XD

[amcw177]

Well, whoever the original requester was we obviously share the same love for unusual pairings LOL We should open up a club and recruit *hehe*

Thank you very very much for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it! I was trying to keep 'em as IC as possible (which may explain the epic length LOL) but wasn't too sure if I'd succeeded. So, I'm extra happy that it seems to have worked for you! Thank youuuu ♥

THEN COOKIES AND LOVE YOU SHALL HAVE :DDD

[dame_batsie]

I actually thought about starting a comm just for rare pairings, but school got in the way and I never really fleshed out the vision for it. XDDD

Ha ha, the extra length is fine. Gotta slowly warm up the readers to the pairing, right? XD

\o/ *happy dance*

[amcw177]

I would be so with you on that \o/

I must admit, my personal OTP in Reborn is 8059/5980 but apart from that there's hardly any pairing that I don't like XD I'm easy like that. So, yeah, rare pairings are yummy!

[amcw177]

They are indeed a very interesting pair ;) I'm really happy that you liked it, since I absolutely adore the way you write them. Especially Hibari ♥ So, I'm extra glad I could provide you with an enjoyable read! Thanks so much, dear!