Bupkis

[alleyalligator]

Beep.  Beep.  Beep.

I know that sound.  It’s taken me a moment to place it, but I’ve got it now.  It’s one of those heart monitoring machines that let you know you’re still alive.  I must be in hospital.

Beep.  Beep.  Beep.

It’s all coming back to me.  I remember it was dark and it was raining.  I was driving home.  There was a big bang and a flash

Comments

[rumplebuttkins]

It was a truly sad and unnerving entry, and speaks to my fear of a similar situation. And so: Great entry!

[alleyalligator]

Thank you - my fears definitely worked their way into this one.

[blythe025]

Oh, this is horrifying! It gave me chills. Very well written though.

[alleyalligator]

Thank you.

[noodledays]

OMG! DDD:

[alleyalligator]

Thanks for reading :)

[muchtooarrogant]

This was a chilling entry, extremely well written. Great job!

Dan

[alleyalligator]

Thank you!

[roina_arwen]

Excellently done, and a very enjoyably chilling read.

[alleyalligator]

Thanks a lot!