Comments | alizep: This is How it Feels

alizep

This is How it Feels

Aug 31, 2009 23:42

( She drank in the minute details of his face in that moment - the way that his jaw tensed and his light green eyes had become a shade darker. )

sm_monthly, theme_minako, minako aino, series_reliablewitness, sailormoon, kunzite

Comments 7

lovelylytton September 1 2009, 07:33:16 UTC

*blinks*

Idon'tknowwhattosaythiswassogoodthatitmademeincoherent.

alizep September 25 2009, 02:52:54 UTC

Thank you! Kunzite can be a bit tricky. Venus better watch out....

Glad you liked this!

lovelylytton January 4 2010, 17:43:26 UTC

Like doesn't quite cover it.

sugarcross September 1 2009, 08:58:59 UTC

*fangirl squeals*

This is jaw dropping good and sexy and hot and bold and... I simply can't articulate my thoughts enough because I LOVED IT. Every. Moment.

Half-naked Kunzite = best thing in the (SM fanfiction) world!

alizep September 25 2009, 02:54:07 UTC

Yay!

And yes - somehow half naked Kunzite is sexier than fully naked Kunzite because he is good like that....

Now if he would just cooperate on the next part....ugh!

sea_thoughts September 1 2009, 09:11:58 UTC

Wow. I guess this answers the question of whether they were involved or not, doesn't it? ;) I like how unsure both of them are (not just Venus) and how the one answer Kunzite isn't expecting is the one she gives him, that's very in character! I like the ambiguous ending as well.

venusorbit1 September 2 2009, 01:09:23 UTC

BLARF!! I KNOW I WAS THERE WHEN YOU WERE WRITING IT, BUT THE FINISHED PRODUCT WAS SO FUCKING GOOD THAT I COULDN'T READ IT ALL AT ONCE...I HAD TO READ IT SENTENCE, STEP AWAY, SENTENCE, LOOK AT SOMETHING ELSE, SENTENCE, ETC., BECAUSE I DIDN'T WANT IT TO BE OVER YET. HOLY SHIT. HOLY SHIT.

NOW I NEED TO KNOW: DID SHE STAY OR DID SHE GO?? WHAT IS IT YOU MUST TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!! (YES I KIND OF HAVE AN IDEA BUT UNTIL ITS WRITTEN I WILL FREAK OUT AND BUG YOU COMPULSIVELY.

ALSO BY THAT ENDING IT MAKES IT SOUND LIKE THERE WAS ROUND 2. HOLY SHIT.

MY MIND IS BLOWN. I CAN'T QUOTE A FAVORITE LINE OR PART BECAUSE IT IS ALL MY FAVORITE. YOU ARE A FUCKING GENIUS. I'M STUNNED. THAT IS ALL.

WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!