Sailor Stars: Another Story Part 1

[alizep]

Katashi - Kunzite
Yuuki - Zoicite
Naoki - Nephrite
Minoru - Jadeite

The small girl stood at the edge of the pier crying. She appeared to be around three years old and had a head full of bright red curls that had been pulled into what resembled heart shaped knots on either side of her hairline. Both men looked at each other as they came across her

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[sugarcross]

I was hopeful it'd be the continuation of the Adonis POV story... ;P But I must also say this new one looks to be an interesting beginning.

“What are you?” he growled at her, his clothing being replaced by his sudden transformation into a white jacket and brown leather pants with a dark blue cape hanging from his shoulders.

Oooh so they are shitennou already?! I have so many questions in my head now, but I am also hopeful you'll answer them in no time.

Katashi’s eyes narrowed and light growl was evoked from his lips. “You’re going to get an earful from my mom if you hurt her favorite niece!”

*laughs* Wonder where, or from WHO, she learnt this trick. Katashi does seem the type to be most easily fooled among the boys.

[alizep]

So remember when I threw Adonis in the closet so that your muse could run free....yeah....he's refusing to step back out and work on that story.

So instead, I'm going to write a Kunzite fic hoping that he gets jealous enought to cooperate.

I have so many questions in my head now, but I am also hopeful you'll answer them in no time.
Ummm......I'll get back to you on this..... ^^;

[sugarcross]

So remember when I threw Adonis in the closet so that your muse could run free....yeah....he's refusing to step back out and work on that story.

My muse is running around my head now indeed. But I am only having a free period at the moment so that poor bunny cannot be fed until I go home.

So instead, I'm going to write a Kunzite fic hoping that he gets jealous enought to cooperate.

Then I demand MORE Kunzite hotness from you!! Either this new one or the other one. *puppy eyes*

[alizep]

Oh...not the puppy eyes....I can never refuse those....

Alright - one Kunzite on a platter on the way!

[xxdesert_rose]

Adonis love or Kunzite love works just fine for me. You know I don't care what you cook up! As long as I get to enjoy your works then I'm a happy camper!

[alizep]

Aw! *blushes*

I just want you to know that I am seriously going to send you the next chapter of For the Love of Venus. I have about 18 pages (it's getting ridiculously long I know....) and I'm having trouble connecting dots. You'll have to give me lots of feedback so that I can hurry up and finish this story. I think two more chapters and I can finally close the book on it.

So make space on that calendar! *hugs*

[xxdesert_rose]

For you my dear, of course! It's my pleasure to help out a fellow Moonie! But of course I'd be willing to work as your beta for anything else as well. Just remember to give me a heads up on when you plan to send the next chapter so I can refresh my memory and re-read the last chapter you posted okay?

[alizep]

Ok....so now that I'm focusing again....do you have time to read the very rough next chapter that I've pieced together?

Let me know when you're ready and I'll shoot it on over to you. Thanks!!!

(Where is the fic you owe me by the way?)

[lovelylytton]

You are wonderful!
I'm serious, you are! To have a fic with Chibi-Chibi and Kunzite in it is utterly amazing. I like Chibi-Chibi so much better than Chibi-Usa. Favourite line:
“Who are you?” he demanded of the child, almost feeling silly for interrogating a child like one would a murderer.

The sudden transformation of Kunzite is also a nice touch and I can't wait to read more. Four shitennou and a toddler. It doesn't get any better.

[alizep]

To have a fic with Chibi-Chibi and Kunzite in it is utterly amazing.
Whew! Well then you'll be happy to know that another chapter should be on the way shortly. I'm not positive where to go with this series, but I have a few ideas.

Glad you liked this first part. :)