"Abyss" Sam/Dean for apocalyptothon, NC-17

[alizarin_nyc]

Title: Abyss
Author: Alizarin_nyc
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Some graphic horror stuff throughout, NC-17 at the very end for sex.
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Spoilers: All of Season 2
Written for: The apocalyptothon, recipient slodwick. Beta by regala_electra.
Request: A breakdown between realities interrupts the Yellow-Eyed Demon's plans, and now the guys have an even bigger

Comments

Excellent

[angels3]

you had my acid reflux acting up I was so stressed with all the dying.

Excellent story the emotional meltdowns and sheer need to feel alive and with someone that loves you was well written.

Re: Excellent

[alizarin_nyc]

Sorry for the acid reflux! I know I packed it with angst and stuff, but I'm glad you enjoyed and that it worked. *whew*

[soundingsea]

I enjoyed this! Of course being able to talk to Dean is what keeps Sam going. And wow, nifty twisty plot. Good one.

[alizarin_nyc]

Thank you so much. It took a lot out of me. I kept coming up with new ways it would never work, so had to keep bobbing and weaving around all the roadblocks. At the end I wasn't even sure what I was doing. So, I'm very pleased you enjoyed it.

[mf_luder_xf]

I just have to *glomp* this fic because it's got everything I love. SPN boys, references to X-Files, Stargate-type science, and of course, it's the end of the world.

Brilliantly written, fabulous plot, and just the perfect amount of angst. Yay!!

[alizarin_nyc]

Whee! For a while I wondered if I was writing SGA or SPN. Rodney would have had the apocalypse 'verse physics NAILED.

Your compliments please me greatly. Thank you.

[I wrote your prompt for slashfest but I was late and got banned from the comm, and I meant to write you and let you know, but kept forgetting. In case you're interested, the link in my journal is here: http://alizarin-nyc.livejournal.com/107764.html. Oops!]

[mf_luder_xf]

Oh, he totally would. Rodney is genius. ;-D

Oooo!! I am off to check it out right now!

[altyronsmaker]

Great story!
Best imagery: the slaughterhouse stuff, with Sam wading in the corral with *yuck* the remains. Not that I think it's cool, but wow, I could totally see that.

And Sam's desperation once he got back to the real world. Whoa. There's nothing that's going to alleviate those three years spent in hell, and that he tries, and is so desperate is just achingly beautiful. Really good job.

and YED was CREEPY.

[alizarin_nyc]

Thank you!

I don't know where that image came from, really, but my ex-boyfriend's family lived on an old farm in Indiana and there were all these creepy abandoned barns that I've never quite forgotten.

Writing the YED was surprisingly easy after watching the finale of S2 one more time. He has quite the ego. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.

[tabaqui]

Ah, yes. Weird and freaky and creepy and *sad* and hurty and just perfect, there, at the end, all that tension and terror and rage finally getting an out...

Good stuff.

[alizarin_nyc]

Many thanks. I *so* completely wasn't sure about this fic, and I'm really happy to hear that.