in another world, I think I'd miss you if we never met (2/?)

Aug 22, 2010 21:03

in another world, I think I'd miss you if we never met (2/?)
super junior m: zhou mi, kyumi
pg-13, 3365 words in chapter 2
one day, zhou mi wakes up in a world where he was never part of super junior m.

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sj: kyumi, !fandom: super junior, #prompt: nanowrimo, category: slash, au, sj: zhoumi pov, !multichaptered, @i'd miss you if we never met

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papered August 28 2010, 02:51:51 UTC
Thank you for reading! :) Next chapter is up, if you're interested.

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coffeebang August 23 2010, 04:49:39 UTC
;__; Don't tell me Kyu just freaked out and Mi is going to get the wrong idea?

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papered August 28 2010, 02:52:14 UTC
Sorry for the late response - but next chapter is up, if you're interested. :)

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sirhin August 23 2010, 05:41:53 UTC
Do you know how many people are rooting for Qmi? It’s almost rivaling Hanchul.
haha, when I read this, I suddenly thought of when Heechul commented on how Geng was as famous in China as he was in Korea. ♥ I love this line. ^^

Anyway... Heechul is all-knowing.

I was totally spazzing when I read that they were mutually kissing - then you had to do that. WHY DID YOU DO THAT???? >__< Why did it have to end right there??

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papered August 28 2010, 02:52:54 UTC
I love using Heechul to diffuse some of the tension and lighten things up a bit. He's very good at that, :')

But yes, thank you for reading! Next chapter is up, if you're interested.

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hamsterhen89 August 23 2010, 07:49:57 UTC
You idiot of a Kyuhyun T-T Just go back to Mimi!!!! BTW, I like this ~ :D Please hurry and slap Kyuhyun so he can go back to Mimi!

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papered August 28 2010, 02:53:10 UTC
:3 Thank you for reading! Next chapter is up, if you're interested.

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hamsterhen89 August 28 2010, 05:56:53 UTC
of course I'm interested :D :D

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taylormercury August 23 2010, 12:23:06 UTC
This is really good, so far. I've just read both chapters in one go, and just. These are the kind of fics I like to read, you set it up immediately with what was going on, and I'm all set to follow this through to wherever it may go! The premise, when we get there, is so interesting, but I'm enjoying the backstory we get first! Your writing is easy and enjoyable to read, everything just flows together naturally, and I'm liking the characterisation of those we've seen so far!

Poor Zhou Mi, panicking and freaking out about all this! And the little moments between him and Kyuhyun just feed my QMi bias so hard *~* Heechul was a fun addition too, and I love his logic and way of thinking XD

But oh my god, ending this chapter like that?! I must know now what's going to happen next!

I feel like my comment isn't really saying what I want to tell you, but I really like this so far, and I cannot wait to see more of this! Poor Zhou Mi ♥

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papered August 28 2010, 02:55:33 UTC
Thank you for the comment - especially one as sweet as this! I'm glad that you're liking the backstory - I was a little worried that it would be too long at first, considering we still haven't gotten to the actual premise, but it's good to know that people don't mind it. :)

Anyway, ty again for the detailed comment! :) Next chapter is up now, if you're interested.

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