Comments | alived: Harry Potter: Make Us Immortal With A Kiss

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Feb 15, 2008 01:06

Title: Make Us Immortal With A Kiss
Author: papered
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters/Pairing: Draco/Hermione
Rating: PG
Word Count: 456
Summary: Hermione prefers to verbalize things - but to Draco, her gestures speak as loudly as her words.
Notes: Written for the St. Valentine's Day 7 Kisses Challenge; day 2: playful kiss

( Okay, so he was being taken anyway. But that didn't mean he had to give in gracefully. For a second, Draco wondered if he could somehow kick the redhead in groin without hurting himself (his left foot was placed so conveniently right there), but then decided that suffering any kind of pain for a Weasley just wasn't worth the trouble. )

Comments 12

luvscharlie February 16 2008, 06:32:09 UTC

Very nice. There are a few typos you might want to fix, but otherwise, it's really very cute. I love the part where Draco considers kicking Fred.

papered February 16 2008, 19:25:17 UTC

Thanks for reading! :)

artsy_aura February 16 2008, 06:50:21 UTC

I love how frantic she gets, and Draco's way of shutting her up. ^_^

papered February 16 2008, 19:25:48 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed! :D

waveless February 16 2008, 07:35:44 UTC

HAHAHA, quick with her tongue... ^^)

papered February 16 2008, 19:28:41 UTC

Lmfao, yeah, my brain was giggling like a little kid while I wrote that. XDD

floorcoaster February 16 2008, 10:12:37 UTC

Lovely! Great job! :D

papered February 16 2008, 19:30:52 UTC

Thank you! ♥

bombottosa February 16 2008, 11:16:30 UTC

adorable!!I loved it <3

papered February 16 2008, 19:37:46 UTC

Thank you! <3