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Sweet Dreams : POTC

Jan 25, 2008 11:56

Title: Sweet Dreams
Summery: James comes homes late one night…
Pairing: Grovington
Genre: POTC - Romance
Rating: PG
WARNING: Slash
Author: Rebecca (alienstars2004 / Blueberry Pancakes)
Feedback: Yes, please.
Author's Notes: Now continued in "Daydreams"

( Sweet Dreams )

grovington, pirates of the caribbean, slash, fic

Comments 6

belial_84 January 22 2008, 21:50:43 UTC

I like it as it is, I think it's... perfect ù_ù

alienstarsfics January 27 2008, 02:30:55 UTC

Hmmm... Thanks! Perhaps I'll continue in a sort of... not really sequal, but not really total continuation thing... best of both worlds. :)

Rebecca
Ahoy!

wicked_jade January 23 2008, 04:25:49 UTC

Aww, they're so cute! And I love the argument that James doesn't have any kids to spoil, so that falls to Lane. I have a soft spot for Grovington lately (I'm working on a Grovington story of my own, god help me), so I would LOVE to see you continue it. As for where to go with it...maybe have Teddy's reaction as he wakes up in a sleeping James' arms? Not very creative, I know. I'm coming up blank. Whatever you choose to do with it, I'm sure it will be lovely. :)

alienstarsfics January 27 2008, 02:31:52 UTC

Aww... I love the idea of Teddy with sleeping!James in his arms... that's just adorable... Perhaps not for the scene immediately following this, but now that's got to be in there. :)

And there must be cuddling, preferably indecent amounts of it, and fluff. :P

Rebecca
Ahoy!

mrs_norrington January 24 2008, 01:28:58 UTC

Why not continue? I like the sleepy quality to this. :)

alienstarsfics January 27 2008, 02:32:16 UTC

I liked that too... Not sure if I'll be able to keep that, but it's worth a shot. :)

Rebecca
Ahoy!