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alien_writings

The Church and Its Orbs - Planning

Aug 19, 2013 23:50

I wrote in my The Church and Its Orbs universe for the first time in forever. This is possibly canon and possibly not. Enjoy!

---------“How are we going to get this priest to help us?” I ask. “He’s known what’s going on for ages and has done nothing.” My jaw clenches just thinking about it. I stare out my bedroom window, watching the heavy ( Read more... )

pov: gemma, character: wren, series: the church and its orbs, rating: pg-13, character: gemma, character: kai, original fiction, writerverse

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pixiebelle August 20 2013, 04:21:45 UTC

Oh my! I LOVED this! It caught my interest from the beginning and I just loved every minute of it. The dialogue was great... I love Wren. I could totally see this as a novel that people would go crazy for.

alien_writings August 20 2013, 05:03:11 UTC

Aw, thank you! <3

I'm glad you enjoyed this so much. :D

My favorite line of Wren's was her answer to Kai asking her if she ever knew she had to do something but really didn't want to.

Also, Kai loves his rainbows, like, a lot. I don't think most gods when they do that "giant column of light" trick have rainbow lights. He just likes rainbows. I think I told you how he's gay in a world that doesn't have the rainbow symbolism, right? So, in-universe, the rainbows are just a thing he likes, but to readers they're a clue of sorts. VERY SUBTLE, yes? lol ( ... )