Comments | alien_writings: I Prefer the Mind Control Rewrite

alien_writings

I Prefer the Mind Control Rewrite - Chapter 24

Mar 05, 2013 15:55

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Xan didn’t tell anyone about me. Xan didn’t tell anyone about me. He. Didn’t. Tell. Anyone. About. Me.

( The realization kept hitting me and hitting me and hitting me. )

character: syra, character: firi, character: dylan, 500themes, pov: dylan, character: xan, pairing: xan/dylan, original fiction, series: i prefer the mind control

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theun4givables March 7 2013, 01:50:49 UTC

Okay, now that I've taken some time to let my thoughts sit and simmer a bit ( ... )

alien_writings March 11 2013, 03:23:50 UTC

I think Xylan really needs to go on hiatus, because this chapter was kind of really forced, even as I was writing it. :/ I'm probably gonna redo the last few chapters when I return to it.

theun4givables March 11 2013, 11:46:29 UTC

That might be a good idea -- when my brain tells me to let something sit for a little while I do it. That's why StN's coming about a little slower than both StD and GM. But! I did end up figuring out the next like, 10 chapters. Thank you random story-vomming, giving me the rest of the middle.