The Tomorrow Trilogy Fanfiction: On My Own

[alien_writings]

This is fanfic of The Tomorrow Trilogy by theun4givables.

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They say time heals all wounds. Christ, this “they” couldn’t be more wrong. It totally doesn’t work like that. Not when -- not when you lost the fucking love of your life because he took a bullet to save you. Still think it should have been me who died that day. Especially since I’m gonna die

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[theun4givables]

Savinnnnnnnnn bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb. Jazz was so upset as I read this. "I'm not there! I'm not there to help him and omg he's in so much pain and and and --" I had to remind him that this wasn't ME writing it. Oops.

Same with teen!Savin's voice, you did well with adult!Savin's voice. Love the return of ghost!Jazz, too. I love that this is a thing. <3 Because Jazz would come back to haunt his penis keep an eye on Savin from day one since he passed.

I don't know what autoimmune disorder he gets when his mutation catches up with him, but this was the one at the top of the list. =/ Poor bb.

[alien_writings]

Whatever autoimmune disorder he gets, it's bound to be unpleasant. Poor dude. :/

Ghost!Jazz was a perfect way to end this piece. I was struggling with how to end this, and when you said ghost!Jazz should show up, I kind of had to include him. It would have been just wrong if he didn't appear in a story like this one.

Aw, I'm sorry Jazz got so upset -- and was bothering you when you weren't responsible for this story. Heh, Jazz should blame 500themes for his distress, as the prompt just CALLED for something like this.

The other (not really a) problem with this story? I think it was making Saving haunt my brain, even though he's not a ghost, and I can't write fic for Idol. Dude, I wrote TWO fics about you today. That is is enough, haha.

[lilycobalt]

Awwwwwwwwwww the invisible arms. And pre-tied ties. I didn't know they had those. But, hey, this is the future.

Good for Savin for making the transition happen.

[alien_writings]

Apparently there are ways IRL in the present to pre-tie a tie, though I'm not exactly sure how this works. And ghost!Jazz was theun4givables' idea, but I just had to include it because...how could I not in this story?

And yeah, good for Savin for making the transition happen. Ghost!Jazz agrees with you, haha. :)

[n3m3sis43]

I'm amused by your Council members' names. And the fact that Savin has a pre-tied tie. Why didn't he just do that in the first place? Duh. And d'awww, ghost!Jazz. :D

[alien_writings]

Lol, the amusing names came about because I'm like "thinking up five names all at once? That's too hard, so I'll just name everybody after friends."

Ghost!Jazz is d'awww, isn't he? :)