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The Tomorrow Series Fanfiction: Who Will Lead Us? - Chapter 7

Dec 19, 2012 10:07

This is the sixth chapter in a fanfiction of The Tomorrow Series by theun4givables.

Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5, Chapter 6

---------Jazz's head felt heavy as he woke up after the surgery on his shoulder. That shoulder still hurt, but it felt better than before. He was alive and recovering. Jazz had to be grateful for that, and he was ( Read more... )

character: savin, character: jazz, fanfiction, hc_bingo, character: ravi, fandom: the tomorrow trilogy, character: samantha

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theun4givables December 19 2012, 15:23:29 UTC

lol I love this. Poor Jazz, feeling all guilty about what happened to Savin's family -- poor bb needs to learn it's not all his fault. It's not really his fault at all, even if he DID vote for Mitchel. Because it's all Mitchel's fault that he wanted to fuck with them both and get rid of the NB population all while trying to head the war. Ugh

I also love Alex and Nem and kinda ship them. Kinda. Oops. I also love that once Savin walks into the room Jazz's vision just narrows to him. Poor Ravi -- though I guess he and Jazz didn't quite have the chemistry here than they did in GM, but there were also different circumstances there, too. But I love it.

Jazz's idea to align with Hooba is probably the only thing they have. I hope it works. ;)

alien_writings December 19 2012, 15:30:56 UTC

Magical Disappearing Ravi was so not on purpose, too. Jazz's vision just kind of narrowed onto Savin without my even meaning for that to happen, oops. Yeah, Jazz and Ravi don't have quite the ridiculous chemistry they had in GM, alas. And I LIKE Ravi, too, so it's not like I wanted them to have less chemistry, haha. It just...happened that way.

Let's hope Jazz's plan works! ;)

ETA: I love Alex and Nem, too. And also kinda ship them. Oops.

theun4givables December 19 2012, 19:56:06 UTC

It just happened that way, probably because Jazz is definitely in love with Savin and not desperately trying to move on from him, at this point. Poor Ravi.

Hope is all they have, lol

xD

n3m3sis43 December 20 2012, 13:02:29 UTC

Jazz is so fucking stubborn and so like "I'm fucking fine" in the canon it's ridiculous and I'm glad you pointed that out in your fic. Repeatedly, haha. Not sure exactly why it drives me so crazy since I may have certain characters who behave in a similar fashion. Oh well. Anyway, I feel like you captured that stubbornness really well here and in the previous chapter.

Yessssss.... Nem! I love that he's a guy. I love that the first thing he fucking says in your story includes the words "I win at life". I love that Alicia ships him with her character I'm dying right now. :D

"There's almost no way Mitchel could ever know about this call!” really sounds like Famous Last Words, though, doesn't it? Oops. Nem, why do I have a feeling I you are gonna get them all caught? lololol fabulous. Although Alex is a traitor anyway, right? I forget, and oops I think that was a spoiler. Nobody read that, okay ( ... )