The Tomorrow Series Fanfiction: Who Will Lead Us? - Chapter 7

[alien_writings]

This is the sixth chapter in a fanfiction of The Tomorrow Series by theun4givables.

Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5, Chapter 6

---------Jazz's head felt heavy as he woke up after the surgery on his shoulder. That shoulder still hurt, but it felt better than before. He was alive and recovering. Jazz had to be grateful for that, and he was

Comments

[n3m3sis43]

Jazz is so fucking stubborn and so like "I'm fucking fine" in the canon it's ridiculous and I'm glad you pointed that out in your fic. Repeatedly, haha. Not sure exactly why it drives me so crazy since I may have certain characters who behave in a similar fashion. Oh well. Anyway, I feel like you captured that stubbornness really well here and in the previous chapter.

Yessssss.... Nem! I love that he's a guy. I love that the first thing he fucking says in your story includes the words "I win at life". I love that Alicia ships him with her character I'm dying right now. :D

"There's almost no way Mitchel could ever know about this call!” really sounds like Famous Last Words, though, doesn't it? Oops. Nem, why do I have a feeling I you are gonna get them all caught? lololol fabulous. Although Alex is a traitor anyway, right? I forget, and oops I think that was a spoiler. Nobody read that, okay?

Random wording nitpick, although you didn't ask for it:
You said "almost killed himself" like 3 times in a really small space. Maybe reword it if you ever feel like doing edits?