The Tomorrow Series Fanfiction: Who Will Lead Us? - Speak Now (Missing Wedding Scene)

[alien_writings]

This is a missing scene from my Tomorrow Series fanfiction " Who Will Lead Us?" -- I started the story after this scene, but I'm feeling like it might have been good to include it.

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Jazz bit his lip as he entered the hotel, his stomach twisting. He slowly made his way to the the front desk.

Comments

[theun4givables]

The best kind of angsty mistake of all, Jazz.

Also unfff, that kiss. I mean, I know it's not supposed to be sexy and it's supposed to be desperate as fuck but god DAMN you two. You need to stop that. Jazz loves getting pushed up against walls, too. Savin just hit like five like buttons in two seconds.

(I realize my comments don't make sense as I'm reacting and not thinking but bear with me lolol)

Jaaaaaazzzzz. You are so lucky I didn't do this to you bb because omggg you are so bitter and angry and upset and I just want to hug you and tell you it'll all get better -- but I know it doesn't, lol. I like this as a start for both of them realizing that they can't really stay away from each other -- that there was way more there than they both thought there ever was.

Savin, I'd be mad at you but I'm so not. I'm really not. I should be. But I'm not. WHY AM I NOT MAD AT YOU WAY TO GO ASSHOLE YOU JUST DID THE WRONG THING.

[alien_writings]

As much as I often want to punch canon!Savin, I don't actually want to punch fic!Savin for this, which is kinda weird. I guess it's harder to hate the dude if you're writing him?

These guys really DO have a "let's make everything sexy" thing, don't they? I'm like "dudes, this isn't supposed to be smut, and Jazz wouldn't take it there anyway." BUT IT WAS SEXY, DAMMIT.

Alas, things do not get better in my story. Nope, this is pretty much It Got Worse: The Fic, haha.

This scene might become the actual starting scene of this fic.

[theun4givables]

I think it is, dude. Because I don't hate him like 90% of the time when I'm writing him. Even though I know I should be angry at him.

They dooooo. It's just their chemistry. I was like oh maaaan that was hot. And I'm sure Savin thought it was, too.

Nope, it doesn't. Not in your story. And hm, it seems so far removed from the current timeline of your fic but I dunno.

[n3m3sis43]

I really hope you are adding this into your actual fic because I very much enjoyed it. I do think Jazz would be this upset/butthurt, especially after Savin told him the night before he didn't even want to go through with the wedding.

If this is what happens in the fic, it's pretty sad that Savin couldn't even wait until after his wedding night to cheat on Mari. But hey, I can see that. It's Savin, he's an ass, he didn't want this kid and he didn't really want Mari anymore either.

[alien_writings]

Yeah, sadly, that is the kind of thing Savin might do. :/

I think I am going to add this to my actual fic, because it does fit in well. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. :D