NaNo Ridiculousness Day 9

[alien_writings]

Hey there,

Here's Chapter 9 of "I Prefer the Mind Control." I'm trying to make actual chapters now. Enjoy the NSFW ridiculousness!

Day 1, Day 2, Day 3, Day 4, Day 5(ish), Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8

---------Unfortunately, things didn't look any more reasonable in the morning. Not that anything looked reasonable in the morning, because, you

Comments

[theun4givables]

Awwww, Dylan. I love that he's so determined to stay with Xan, even if he did just meet him like...days ago in canon or however long it's been. It's so obvious that he really needs what Xan can offer him, in terms of self-esteem and everything else.

I liked this section. :) I especially like the sexy parts. Unfffff.

[alien_writings]

Yay, I'm glad you liked my section! ^_^

Xan and Dylan really haven't known each other for very long, have they?

[n3m3sis43]

Hmm, so Dylan is not a morning person either? I guess that explains all the SynthBrew coffee, then. Does this entire planet's politics revolve around sex? Because I notice Firi was extra willing to help keep Dylan around after the "show" he and Xan put on for her (which, btw, unf). Maybe the whole competition for the throne is sex-related in some way, too, hahahaha.

[alien_writings]

I haven't figured out all the details of this world, but I think a large part of the reason Ayli is highly unlikely to win the throne is because she is not interested in sex as Zimarans usually practice it.