Comments | alien_writings: NaNo Ridiculousness Day 5 + some of Day 6 (gotta start making actual chapters!)

alien_writings

NaNo Ridiculousness Day 5 + some of Day 6 (gotta start making actual chapters!)

Nov 06, 2012 15:29

Hey there,

Here's Day 5 and some of Day 6 (got to start making real chapters) of "I Prefer the Mind Control." Enjoy the ridiculousness!

Day 1, Day 2, Day 3, Day 4

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“Holy fuck, you're one of the Kings!” I shouted.

( How the fuck could that be possible? )

nanowrimo, pairing: xan/dylan, character: xan, nano novel 2012, character: myd, character: dylan, series: i prefer the mind control

Comments 2

theun4givables November 6 2012, 20:43:32 UTC

lololol I love Dylan and his fourth-wall breaking and his understanding of literary devices and how they're utilized. It makes reading this just that much more enjoyable for me.

I don't know how you did it but you make Soulbreaking sound like a not-horrifying thing. I think that was utterly amazing how you did that. Because really. That concept is just terrifying when you get right down to it -- but obviously for Zimarans it's not that way at all.

And apparently it's not that way at all for Dylan, too. ;)

n3m3sis42 November 7 2012, 19:55:39 UTC

Lololololol at there actually BEING a Deus Ex Machina in the fucking fridge. At least, I think there was. Dylan understands literary devices better than I do, so I can't really be sure. I just make up random shit that makes me want to throw myself out a window - I don't understand the mechanics of writing.

By the way, thank you SO MUCH for writing stuff that doesn't make me want to throw myself out a window. I needed that.

I think this post was my favorite so far out of your NaNo ones. Although I'm kind of sad that Myd's necklace thingy didn't turn out to be a mind control pendant. Okay, not really. :D