NaNo Ridiculousness Day 4

Nov 06, 2012 15:25

Hey there,

Here's Day 4 of "I Prefer the Mind Control." Enjoy the NSFW ridiculousness!

Day 1, Day 2, Day 3

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Xan smiled down at me. “It won't be long, will it? I have you.”

It wasn't long. )

nanowrimo, nano novel 2012, character: myd, character: dylan, nsfw (actual sexual content - really!), pairing: xan/dylan, character: xan, series: i prefer the mind control, character: berri

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theun4givables November 6 2012, 20:29:11 UTC
As goofy as this piece can be it's kind of depressing that Xan's dad has such a serious health issue. =/ Poor Xan! Because I know he doesn't know (yet) and that he's not going to be very happy to find out about it.

Also, it may be a secret, Myd, but if you wanted to keep it a secret woudn't you have...not told Dylan? Of course, he's not exactly lucid and a little loopy and wouldn't have considered that, but there's no way Dylan's not telling Xan. Because Xan fucking deserves to know.

I enjoy this story so much, though. :)

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alien_writings November 6 2012, 20:48:14 UTC
Myd is very much...not all there. He shouldn't have told and whoops. I wonder what's going to happen now that his invisible guards know Dylan knows the secret. I bet he's going to be taken to an interrogation room with Xan. And there will be blackmail sex involved somehow because lol. Not that Dylan minds sex...

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theun4givables November 6 2012, 21:05:51 UTC
Mmmm, blackmail sex.....

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n3m3sis43 November 7 2012, 00:21:53 UTC
Yeah, umm. If this is a secret, why's Myd telling Xan's plaything? Oh yeah, his brain is borked. As if the pajamas and his expecting Dylan to be invisible weren't clue enough, ha. So... why are they pink? Is that just his preferred color?

This story was a welcome break from the one in my head right now.

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alien_writings November 7 2012, 14:32:00 UTC
I've no idea why the pajamas are pink. They just...are. The "expecting Dylan to be invisible" thing has something of a basis in reality as the cyborg bodyguards actually ARE invisible a lot of the time and Dylan's a cyborg. Still, Myd's brain is utterly borked, which is why he was serving as the resident info-dumper.

I'm glad I could provide you with a break from your story. :)

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