Title: Wingtip
Author: alianora
Rating: R
Summery: Ariel AU. Simon gets left behind.
This is, in fact, sort of a Rayne story. But not exactly. *innocent smile*
Massive thanks to
michmak for the beta through part 16.
Worship to
magelette, who picked up at part 17.
Dedicated to
literarylemming, without whom this would not
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but it was still a sweet chapter. How much more is left to go?
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And i think about 4 more parts? Maybe?
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Well, I'm happy to get another piece of the story. And I kinda want a Jayne of my own, who'll spin my around and drop his hat on my head. *swoon* Great job!
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They are so incredibly SWEET!!
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I really love this universe you've created. All of the characters seem very real to themselves, despite the changes, and the relationship between Jayne and Birdy is delightful while also kind of...I don't know, wistful and weird and wonderful. The backstory on River is very believable, and I can see this happening as a result of what happened to them.
Even when I'm annoyed with Simon, I think you've got him right on. Love the way you've captured Mal's voice. But let's face it, the glory of this story is Birdy and Jayne, and I'm thrilled and fangirly when you update. Thanks so much for such a great read, and I do hope Birdy and Jayne can entice you to write soon!
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