Comments | aliaspiral: Firefly Fic: Wingtip (Part 19)

aliaspiral

Firefly Fic: Wingtip (Part 19)

Oct 12, 2007 10:31

Title: Wingtip
Author: alianora
Rating: R
Summery: Ariel AU. Simon gets left behind.
This is, in fact, sort of a Rayne story. But not exactly. *innocent smile*

Massive thanks to michmak for the beta through part 16.
Worship to magelette, who picked up at part 17.

Dedicated to literarylemming, without whom this would not ( Read more... )

wingtip, firefly fic

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lady_cleo2001 October 12 2007, 20:21:40 UTC

See icon :D

eustacia_vye28 October 12 2007, 20:46:51 UTC

aw... poo on LJ for not letting you edit. :(

but it was still a sweet chapter. How much more is left to go?

aliaspiral October 13 2007, 01:25:40 UTC

It wasnt lj. It was the server at work - it flagged the edit page as "Japanese pornography". Go figure.

And i think about 4 more parts? Maybe?

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fairandbright October 12 2007, 19:38:04 UTC

LJ's always a bitch, but I can't believe it won't let you edit your own entry! *shakes fist*

Well, I'm happy to get another piece of the story. And I kinda want a Jayne of my own, who'll spin my around and drop his hat on my head. *swoon* Great job!

literarylemming October 13 2007, 01:52:44 UTC

*COOOOOOOOOOOOOO*

They are so incredibly SWEET!!

long overdue feedback hellesgift October 14 2007, 20:20:07 UTC

Hi there. I don't think I've ever commented here, but I should have. I mean, when you get to the point where you check regularly for an update and cheer when there is one: well, it's time to comment, right? :-)

I really love this universe you've created. All of the characters seem very real to themselves, despite the changes, and the relationship between Jayne and Birdy is delightful while also kind of...I don't know, wistful and weird and wonderful. The backstory on River is very believable, and I can see this happening as a result of what happened to them.

Even when I'm annoyed with Simon, I think you've got him right on. Love the way you've captured Mal's voice. But let's face it, the glory of this story is Birdy and Jayne, and I'm thrilled and fangirly when you update. Thanks so much for such a great read, and I do hope Birdy and Jayne can entice you to write soon!