The Wrong Feels Right [S/A]

Jul 29, 2012 18:37

Title: The Wrong Feels Right
Author: alexgokart
Pairing: Jack Barakat/Alex Gaskarth
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Abuse; Alex Gaskarth detests the fucking word.
A/N: So my lovely better half valeohyeah requested an abuse fic, and then this happened. I don't really like it all that much but..whatcha gonna do? The title and entire story is based off the song Love The Way You Lie by ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, pairing: alex gaskarth/jack barakat

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valeohyeah July 29 2012, 09:04:03 UTC
AND I KNOW I'VE SAID THIS ALL BEFORE BUT JFC MY LYRIC REFERENCES ARE LAME AND THIS STORY OWNS MY FEELS O K A Y DOWNRIGHT PERFECT MY QUEEN ROLLS ON THE FLOOR SOBBING

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alexgokart July 29 2012, 09:12:13 UTC
NO SHUSH YOUR MOUTH BEFORE I PUT MY DICK IN IT BUT YES YOU ARE WELCOME EVEN THOUGH I'LL NEVER BELIEVE YOU NA NA NA RUNS AROUND YOU NAKED

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valeohyeah July 29 2012, 09:37:03 UTC
so i just had the mental image of me sobbing on the floor and you running around me naked and it's saef to say i have issues o M F G good things

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merrikat95 July 29 2012, 13:03:05 UTC
This is so hauntingly beautiful. I haven't read an abuse fic in such a long time, this was a nice change from all the cute fluffy stuff. And fuck I realy love your writing style okay it's so descriptive and it makes me FEEL like while reading this I could pretty much agree with Alex and say that domestic abuse is perfectly fine jfc your writing is so CONVINCING. Thank you for writing perfection.

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alexgokart July 30 2012, 09:34:20 UTC
I agree that the fluff gets a bit too much to handle sometimes :P
And thank you oh my God it makes me so HAPPY when people compliment my writing.

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alex_g4skarth July 29 2012, 13:54:48 UTC
H o l y s h i t omfg this was amazing and I'm crying stupid fucking jack I don't know what I should be feeling right now but oh my god i love you and this and your writing so much can I marry you

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alexgokart July 30 2012, 09:33:11 UTC
YES YOU CAN OMG I LOVE YOU SO MUCH SEXY

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jacksmangina July 29 2012, 14:35:21 UTC
omfg this is so perfect.

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alexgokart July 30 2012, 09:32:34 UTC
Thank you!

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mcrway July 29 2012, 17:15:31 UTC
This was perfect in a weird, sadistic way. Jack and Alex were great characters both and OMG the ending, so sad but I liked it a lot.
You're a really good writer! I have to add this to my memories so I can read it again sometime, ahshdjdbdf perfect.

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broken_capulet July 29 2012, 21:03:44 UTC
This was the best abuse fic I've ever read hands down.

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alexgokart July 30 2012, 09:28:19 UTC
GAH I can't believe you'd say this since there are so many great ones, thank you!! :*

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