A Woman Undone: Part 73/?

[whatisayouth]

Greetings Gals!  So here we are, so close to the end.  Can you feel it?  Lol!  Are we all pulling for our happy ending?  I did share the ending with kazza the other day, and I must say that it went over remarkably well with her, so don't lose hope for a memorable end.  In the mean time, here is part 73.  I dedicate this part to darholland because

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[kazza1269]

Hey Im first. LOL now everyone is going to hound me for the ending. I could get rich here. Only joking. Im running late baby I will read it when I get to the office. Love you. Im sure it's brilliant though

[whatisayouth]

Yeah, I thought about that - people hounding you for the ending - but I figured you'd be able to resist them. You'd better! LOL! Hope you enjoy the update when you get a chance to read it. I think it will have a special place in your heart.

[kazza1269]

Well I finally got to read it and I must say sweetie it was brilliant. Yes it does have a special place in my heart thank you sweetie.

Don't worry about me spilling the beans they can torture me all they want my lips are sealed....lol.

[arlene84]

Be careful what you say Kazza...darholland has some very good torture techniques! Lol

[svuiconess_70]

SECOND!!!! YEAH!!! LOL! Magnificent chapter, i hope Alex do it for real this time and i hope that we get some Olivia/Alex time and an Dick/Olivia confrontation.

[whatisayouth]

Congrats on being number 2!!! Ah, the goals we set for ourselves...lol. I'm only kidding. I love how enthusiastic everyone is about this story. The next update is in the mix - just trying to figure out how to get to the end cuz obviously I know what it is.....ooo the suspense.

[manz1]

SO brilliant. Thank god for Madison, everyone needs a friend like her. That was another great update. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

[whatisayouth]

Awww...thank you, sweetie. Isn't Madison just the best. I actually wanted to hug and kiss her for being so wonderful. Isn't that funny? You're very welcome for the update. It is my pleasure, believe me.

[bondozer]

WHEEEEEE!!!
Wow, Hunnybun, that was amazing.
Good ol' Madison to the rescue, thank God!!! Alex really needed that from her at this moment. I think she may have finally found herself.
So you've already written the next part? OH. MY. GOD. I canNOT wait for that!!!!
I know the end is in sight and I'm 99.99999% sure it's gonna be a good ending, but at the same time I want this story to go on forever.
This was brilliant and I'm so glad I caught it before I turned in for the night. I'll go to bed with a little grin on my face now!
Lots of love, hun, and a big, big hug for this update, Jools XXXXXX

[whatisayouth]

Well, I haven't written the next part but I know how the story ends. I've actually known since part one, but it's the getting there, you know? 73 parts later...lol. I'm not going to say anything about you being 99.99999% sure about your happy ending cuz you know me - I don't like to give anything away. But I am so glad that I have put a smile on your face with this update as you go to bed. That is my honor.

Lots of love to you...I'll email you later...I want to see how you're doing!

kisses,
KISHA

[svuiconess_70]

yeah isn't it sad that it ending? perhaps we can persude her to write us faithful fans another story? i may sound like madison but does Kisha know how much we LOVE her?(snicker)Kiiiiissssshhhhaaa you must promise us to write us gutters a new story. You can't just disappear on us you know you have created monsters and you need to feed us..lol.

[whatisayouth]

Awwww...it is sad that it's ending, even for me, and I am so honored that you will miss the story as much as I will miss it. I couldn't ask for anything more. You have been so loyal and so enthusiastic about this story. It's really been quite spectacular. I will tell you that I do have another idea for this story - a sequel, in fact - so perhaps you will continue to be fed...lol.

Thank you for the love. I love you too!

[marciafelicity]

aww "because i'm her tomato" loved that!! that was another fabulous update! i'm glad madison was able to get alex to express how she was feeling and have herself a little cry, which i still find to be a challenge for myself. i hope alex does the right thing with liv! can't wait for more!

[whatisayouth]

Oh I'm so glad that the last line wasn't too cheesy. When I went back and read it before I posted, I thought that it might be, but I couldn't leave it out even if it was. It just fit too well. So thank you for saying you loved that line and putting my mind at ease.

Miracles do exist as do angels - Madison, the angel, was able to get Alex to express her emotions, the miracle. Thank goodness for Madison - Super Madison...lol. I too think it's difficult to cry sometimes, but like it says in the story: Sometimes it's physically necessary and when you reach that point and you let it out, you feel so much better afterwards.

[marciafelicity]

i didn't find it cheesy at all, but i guess i'm just a sucker for mushy lovey stuff!
madison is awesomeness, but she has been since she was introduced in the story!

[whatisayouth]

Sometimes mushy lovey stuff as fantastic as long as it's not done too much. I've tried to kind of stay away from the unbelievable mushiness, so I'm glad to hear that this fit well in the update.

"Madison is awesomeness"...I couldn't have said it better myself.