A Woman Undone: Part 57/?

Feb 02, 2008 20:22

Hello Everyone!  I hope I haven't kept you all waiting too long with this update.  The drama continues here, and I hope you like it.  I hope everyone is enjoying their weekend!

Part 57

Alex quickly made her way to Judge Petrovsky’s office hoping to get there before Richard did. She stood outside of her door, straightened out her suit, and knocked ( Read more... )

title: a women undone, author: whatisayouth, length: short fiction (chapter)

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suburban_sailor February 3 2008, 04:51:11 UTC
OMG FIRST?!

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whatisayouth February 3 2008, 04:53:51 UTC
LOL...you sound shocked!

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suburban_sailor February 4 2008, 03:40:37 UTC
i would definately say shocked, yes. in case you hadn't noticed, most of us are pretty much ADDICTED =] competition for first is fierce!

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suburban_sailor February 4 2008, 03:46:16 UTC
argh... i just spelled definitely wrong. sorry, im kind of a grammar nazi, i had to correct it

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suburban_sailor February 3 2008, 04:53:49 UTC
haha, now for a real comment...
loved the update.
alex is amazing. the ending made me smile =D
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GAH richard is such a douche

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whatisayouth February 3 2008, 05:03:27 UTC
Ah...glad you left me a "real" comment, but I'm even happier that you loved the update. I hope it all made sense...lol. The ending is for all you Richard haters, which I guess would be everyone!

And yes, Richard is a douche...a double douche.

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huntkitty February 3 2008, 05:04:59 UTC
i was surprise to judge was on her side. can't wait to see richard cry

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whatisayouth February 3 2008, 05:15:49 UTC
Yeah, well, I didn't want people hating me if Petrovsky sided with Richard. Big fat tears, that's what we want Richard to cry.

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huntkitty February 3 2008, 05:43:03 UTC
yup tears. can't wait to read more

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svuiconess_70 February 3 2008, 05:13:25 UTC
You go Alex show them what you made of and afterwards you kick his butt in court dump his ass......lol..lol very well done Muffin

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whatisayouth February 3 2008, 05:16:28 UTC
Thank you! Time for Alex to get a move on and show what she's really all about.

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svuiconess_70 February 3 2008, 07:11:57 UTC
That right set the grinder...lolI so loving this really i am a court room junkie ,i watch court shows all day for good sake, from judge Marilyn Milian to Judge Judy, i love it what can say...lol.

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whatisayouth February 3 2008, 07:24:42 UTC
I watch Judge Judy too! She's the shit!

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Alex kicks ass! blondjustice February 3 2008, 05:59:19 UTC
Ok...that was too much fun to read. Alex laid the Smack Down! How hot is that???? Oh my...did it get hot in here or what???

Love this line: “It was because he was a little man with a huge ego who still lost the war.” - Dick(head) still thinks he's going to control Alex, and she's going to crush him like a bug. *swoon*

Awesome update, Girlie!

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Re: Alex kicks ass! whatisayouth February 3 2008, 06:32:07 UTC
LOL...you liked it that much, huh? Enough to get you hot...Hmmm...you're getting easier...lol. I'm glad you like that line you referenced. Little man, big ego and he's still gonna get killed! YESSS!

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Re: Alex kicks ass! blondjustice February 3 2008, 07:11:13 UTC
you wish I was that easy! LOL - but it's Alex... what else could I do?

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Re: Alex kicks ass! whatisayouth February 3 2008, 07:24:14 UTC
I'll just keep working on ya.

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