A Woman Undone: Part 57/?

[whatisayouth]

Hello Everyone!  I hope I haven't kept you all waiting too long with this update.  The drama continues here, and I hope you like it.  I hope everyone is enjoying their weekend!

Part 57

Alex quickly made her way to Judge Petrovsky’s office hoping to get there before Richard did. She stood outside of her door, straightened out her suit, and knocked

Comments

[half_life33]

ahh i think petrovsky is the shit here!!!
LOVE the lil fact about napoleon.. ah it was perfect:-D

[whatisayouth]

First time you liked Petrovsky? I'm glad you got the Napoleon reference...wasn't sure if it would go over. Thank you!

[r0ckstar182]

hah! Richypoo got pwned!

[whatisayouth]

Richypoo...lol. That's funny. Thank you.

I added you as a friend...I hope that's okay.

[r0ckstar182]

for sure i'll add u back :B

[rebelsom]

Loved the last comment from Alex. Richard needs to be knocked down a peg or two. Nice work.

[whatisayouth]

Yeah, a lot of people have commented on the last comment that Alex made to Richard. I wonder if he got the implication? He's such a doof.

[hysteria74]

ohhhhh Yeah for Petrovsky! Go Alex! love the story. So... did you research the cases the two lawyers quote or did you make them up ;-)

[whatisayouth]

LOL...I actually spent a lot of time researching them. You can look them up. They're real cases with real legislation. Glad you're loving the ride!

[r0ckstar182]

i'm in law skool right now so if u need some research/info on any legalese let me know

[whatisayouth]

Oh cool! Thanks. I actually asked CabotFan about something a while ago, and she really helped me out, so it's good to know I can call on you if I need some help. Although, that means the pressure is on to get this stuff right...lol.

[djshiva]

FUCK YES!

love the dialogue in this one. the back and forth in chambers, the tete a tete in the hallway. the napoleon line? oh fuckin hell...love. it.

and it's so true to character. i can see alex saying every damn bit of this. "curtilage"? oh fuck yeah, that is SUCH an alex word! i still lose it every time she says "tumescence" in petrovsky's courtroom... gawd i am such a nerd.

love it! this just keeps getting better and better!

[whatisayouth]

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! You touched on everything I liked about this update - the arguing back and forth, the napoleon line, the "curtilage"...everything. Thank you so much! I know what you mean about Alex's vocabulary. It's such a turn on! And don't worry about being a nerd...nerdy women are hot!