A Woman Undone: Part 55/?

Jan 28, 2008 20:01

Hi there!  So it feels like forever since I've posted anything even though it's only been a couple days.  I know that's so unlike me, and I apologize for the delay, but it's been kind of hectic lately.  I have, however, managed to write Part 55, so here it is for you all.  As always, thank you so much for commenting and keeping this story alive.  ( Read more... )

title: a women undone, author: whatisayouth, length: short fiction (chapter)

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tehdeadringer January 29 2008, 04:19:02 UTC
Aw man, a new chappie! Woot!
Damn Richard, he totally killed the mood, no lie, it was going good till he showed up - outta freakin' nowhere!
You know, it's awful of me, but i keep forgetting about the case cuz i care so much about the people involved. Lol. Is that bad?

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whatisayouth January 29 2008, 04:26:13 UTC
No it's not bad that you're forgetting the case. Actually it's good for me because then maybe you'll forget some of the details and I can afford to fudge up a bit...lol. Just kidding. I'm trying to work really hard to keep everything in order and in keeping with the ways of the world.

I know what you mean about Richard bumming you out. It's like, "Damnit! Go away!" He's like that annoying little gnat that just won't quit...lol.

Glad you were excited about the chapter, sweetie. Now you got your fix!

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tehdeadringer January 29 2008, 04:32:11 UTC
I feel kinda bad about forgetting it though, like i normally watch SVU to see the show (and Benson/Cabot moments) but like, now i'm just reading to read about them. Lol. What have you done to me?
He really is.
Omg, you're my fic dealer! Lol.

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whatisayouth January 29 2008, 04:35:24 UTC
Well, I think most people read fanfic to read about the characters and not necessarily the things that they can get from real episodes of the show. So don't feel bad. It's the fantasy of their interactions together that make these stories so interesting. It's not the cases. C'mon, admit it...it's the sex...lol.

Yes, I have been termed a drug dealer because early on someone referred to this story as their crack. So yeah, now I'm a drug dealer! And proud of it!

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half_life33 January 29 2008, 04:20:45 UTC
NUMBAH DOS
*off to read*

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whatisayouth January 29 2008, 04:26:55 UTC
LOL...what language is that? Spangster?

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half_life33 January 29 2008, 04:28:53 UTC
pretty much.. LOL

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whatisayouth January 29 2008, 04:30:20 UTC
I should learn that...lol! Might come in handy.

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hivesix January 29 2008, 04:21:15 UTC
Doot do do... first comment...

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hivesix January 29 2008, 04:21:44 UTC
Or maybe not... my internet is slower than I thought.

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half_life33 January 29 2008, 04:25:45 UTC
lol
hawt icon

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whatisayouth January 29 2008, 04:27:43 UTC
Isn't it though? She kicks ass!

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half_life33 January 29 2008, 04:26:20 UTC
ah woman. you rule. i REALLY should go to bed now tho so... NIIIIGHHHHTTTTTT

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whatisayouth January 29 2008, 04:28:06 UTC
Thanks for staying up to read AWU...what a dedicated fan.

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half_life33 January 29 2008, 04:29:40 UTC
ohhh yes. its only 11:30 though.. i have stayed up later.
night!

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whatisayouth January 29 2008, 04:32:43 UTC
Oh, well that's not too bad...but get some sleep!

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kazza1269 January 29 2008, 04:29:02 UTC
Damn Richard for showing up when he did. What a prick. Brilliant update sweetie. Good to see you back.

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whatisayouth January 29 2008, 04:32:10 UTC
I know, seriously. He's so freakin' annoying. If I had been there, I probably would have clobbered him! Don't hold me back...his face would have been coming off. Hmmm, I think I have a little bit of aggression that I need to work on...lol. Sorry the update took so long. I've been kinda busy...but thanks for the warm welcome.

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kazza1269 January 29 2008, 04:37:29 UTC
That's the word I was looking for annoying. You seem very stressed that is not good for you I know all about stress. I think you need to find a way to calm down or you just might explode...lol We don't want that happening. Who will finish the story?

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whatisayouth January 29 2008, 04:55:51 UTC
Actually, now that I think about it...annoying is actually almost too sweet of a word. You'd have to come up with one of those really big words that no one knows the meaning to in order to describe him. We should make up a word. I'll have to work on that.

Yes, I am very stressed. Lots going on and sometimes I do feel like I'm going to explode. Your thoughts of me are so warm and friendly, thinking about the story first...lol. That actually cracked me up! You're very funny.

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