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A Woman Undone: Part 55/?

Jan 28, 2008 20:01

Hi there! So it feels like forever since I've posted anything even though it's only been a couple days. I know that's so unlike me, and I apologize for the delay, but it's been kind of hectic lately. I have, however, managed to write Part 55, so here it is for you all. As always, thank you so much for commenting and keeping this story alive. ( Read more... )

title: a women undone, author: whatisayouth, length: short fiction (chapter)

Comments 130

iloveliv January 29 2008, 04:35:08 UTC

IM LOVING THIS STORY MORE AND MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

whatisayouth January 29 2008, 04:36:20 UTC

Thank you so much! Have you read it from the beginning? I know you kind of just found this site since you only recently introduced yourself to everyone. So I'm just curious to know if you went back to the very beginning and read.

djshiva January 29 2008, 05:16:56 UTC

richard is a dick. pun intended.

alex needs to whup his arse in court so then we can go back to the smut. ;)

whatisayouth January 29 2008, 05:21:55 UTC

LOL...I think it's slowly being admitted by everyone that the only reason why you all keep coming back is for the possibility of there being some yummy smut! And there ain't nuthin wrong with that!

rebelsom January 29 2008, 05:42:52 UTC

Great Chapter!!! I think Richard is up to something and that broken glass in the sink thing was bull shit (of course you already know that, lol). Anyway, post agian soon.

whatisayouth January 29 2008, 06:39:32 UTC

Hi there! Remember the part when Alex is getting in the cab and the sound of the door closing coincides with the glass shattering against the wall from the cup Richard through? Yeah, that's how he cut his hand. I don't know if you remember that.

I added you as a friend since I don't think we've met before. I hope that's okay. Thank you for commenting!

rebelsom January 29 2008, 06:52:27 UTC

Nah, I remember that, but it just seems like he is doing something he shouldn't be. Especially after the story that Olivia told Alex about him. And yes it's ok that you added me as a friend. You can never have to many of those, lol.

whatisayouth January 29 2008, 06:59:10 UTC

Okay, glad you remember that part. And yes, he can always now be tagged as a suspicious person with a shady past!

I agree with you about the friend thing...very, very true.

huntkitty January 29 2008, 05:55:03 UTC

i can't wait to see what happens next. hope its soon

whatisayouth January 29 2008, 06:40:10 UTC

Hi there! Yeah, things are in rapid motion right now!

huntkitty January 29 2008, 07:31:49 UTC

hope everything is well. look forward reading more

whatisayouth January 29 2008, 08:08:33 UTC

Thank you...same to you.

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svuiconess_70 January 29 2008, 05:57:46 UTC

Richard is one pestering nuisance itch in my rare end, seriously!

Someone needs to throw off a cliff cynical, judgmental, prudish, pretentious and just plain self-important asshole. Ok enough Richard!

Well i don't have to commend you in your Excellency on this chapter cause your tallent is superior. But we all know that the honeymoon would be over the minute they hit the station, but to me i am ready to the hussel. I want to see Alex kick some really butt,I love the ladies but i am also interested on how the case resolves. Nice work Muffin!

whatisayouth January 29 2008, 06:43:20 UTC

I love how you describe Richard. Those are fabulous words to describe him! Perfect!

Thank you for the wonderful comment here! I know everyone is eager to see Richard get his and get it hard! Ew, that doesn't sound pretty. I just hope I can pull it off!

svuiconess_70 January 30 2008, 11:26:20 UTC

I can Kill him for you.lol

whatisayouth January 30 2008, 12:10:46 UTC

Is that the same as working for me? Lol.