Comments | alex_liv_lovers: a "drink" with a twist

allie_svu in alex_liv_lovers

a "drink" with a twist

Apr 28, 2007 23:22

Title: Tea - Earl Grey

Rating: PG

Disclaimer: The characters are not mine, but I’m using them for entertainment only and not for profit.

Notes: The “Drinks” series of short pieces: limited to fewer than three full pages, written primarily as fragments of conversations, each featuring at least one drink. Not yet beta read. This is the first ( Read more... )

title: tea - earl grey, rating: pg, series: drinks, length: midlength, author: allie_svu

Comments 15

apophantic April 28 2007, 23:06:34 UTC

this might actually be my favorite...i LOVED the way you didn't release until the end that she was talking to her mother's grave.

i also like how you've dealt with conviction, lol

anonymous April 28 2007, 23:27:20 UTC

I agree, I think this is my favorite. I love all of them and can't wait for the next one!

svuiconess_70 April 28 2007, 23:29:22 UTC

this one was a masterpiece i realized she was talking to the grave when i read about the daffodils....lol very well done.

indigofan April 28 2007, 23:37:45 UTC

Loved it, loved it.

As always.

anonymous April 29 2007, 00:44:03 UTC

Like everyone else this is also my favorite. I felt like such an idiot when I realized she was at her mother's grave(I also didn't catch on until you mentioned the daffodils); I had totally forgotton that she had died. I LOVED IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!