Title: Tea - Earl Grey
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: The characters are not mine, but I’m using them for entertainment only and not for profit.
Notes: The “Drinks” series of short pieces: limited to fewer than three full pages, written primarily as fragments of conversations, each featuring at least one drink. Not yet beta read. This is the first
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Another wonderful offering.
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loved it..
about half-way through i just had this feeling she wasnt exactly with her mother.. like, my mom would have interrupted me at least 5 times freaking out.. so i just got this feeling.
and about when her & liv were "talking".. aka she was having a flashback it hit me!
i was a bit proud of myself.
lol
anyway.. love how you wrote it.
just gorgeous
♥
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I think I realized that she was talking to her dead mother when she told her mother that she'd met her at her birthday party. But I guess it's because I talk to my mother like that, too, not necessarily on her grave, though.
Great work, so keep going...=)
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Very nice.
S
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