a "drink" with a twist

Apr 28, 2007 23:22

Title: Tea - Earl Grey

Rating: PG

Disclaimer: The characters are not mine, but I’m using them for entertainment only and not for profit.

Notes: The “Drinks” series of short pieces: limited to fewer than three full pages, written primarily as fragments of conversations, each featuring at least one drink. Not yet beta read. This is the first ( Read more... )

title: tea - earl grey, rating: pg, series: drinks, length: midlength, author: allie_svu

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alexliv April 29 2007, 01:18:13 UTC
you are an incredible writer

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greenovalfruit April 29 2007, 02:52:47 UTC
Aw! The whole time I was thinking "Ah, another happy thing with Alex's family being totally accepting of..." and then I realised where you were going with it. The dead can't talk back! Nasty person that I am.

Another wonderful offering.

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half_life33 April 29 2007, 02:53:13 UTC
oh my god!
loved it..
about half-way through i just had this feeling she wasnt exactly with her mother.. like, my mom would have interrupted me at least 5 times freaking out.. so i just got this feeling.
and about when her & liv were "talking".. aka she was having a flashback it hit me!
i was a bit proud of myself.
lol
anyway.. love how you wrote it.
just gorgeous

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capa_06 April 29 2007, 11:17:04 UTC
WOW this was amazing!!! I totally loved it...

I think I realized that she was talking to her dead mother when she told her mother that she'd met her at her birthday party. But I guess it's because I talk to my mother like that, too, not necessarily on her grave, though.

Great work, so keep going...=)

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sofie_aofan April 29 2007, 16:37:02 UTC
This was awesome - in a very melancholy kind of way. My fav. part is where she talks about Olivia and how Olivia can't stay angry for too long with Alex.
Very nice.
S

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