Turf, chapter 4

[caffinate_me]

Pairing: A/O
Rating: still pg-13 i guess
Spoilers: none
Hey everyone, here is chapter 4. Sorry for the slight delay, but it is about twice as long as usual...Enjoy!

Comments

[cheyenne_maria]

"He was flirting with you, the cocky military bastard was flirting with you,"
ohh.. I Love it ..

Love your storys. Love this story... great work. Hope you Update very soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter =)

[caffinate_me]

hehehe thanks! I like that line too!

update will be here soon, already working on ch5. ;-)

[cheyenne_maria]

aww... thats great!!! You're so talented !! =)

[elfcat255]

yay!...told you an interrogation scene would work well...yay!...This is really turning out great...can't wait to read the next part!..Good job!(psst..hurry up with the more Mac scenes!..heh)

[caffinate_me]

yes you did. And since i forgot to post it in my AN, thank you for betaing! and yes, i am fixing to add more Mac, will be here next chapter...i think...heh.

[elfcat255]

aww..shucks..heh..no thanks needed..you helped me with mine so I helped you with yours..fair deal!

[anonymous]

i love this fic. i was hoping harm wouldn't find out about alex and olivia this early. wanted to read more about him flirting with liv. and how she would turn him down for a date. and etc.... hope next update is very very soon

[caffinate_me]

heh. don't worry they'll be plenty more fun Harm interaction....but probably mostly with Alex. hehehe. Next update is coming....if you have any suggestions feel free to let me know!

[oliviamadness]

Oops. Bet he felt stupid. Priceless.

[caffinate_me]

yup. hehehe. Makes for a good mastercard comercial doesn't it?

[alexlivilla_70]

Jealous Alex ....mmmmmmm I love it! great chapter by the way.

[caffinate_me]

I like playing with Alex, its fun. and Thanks!