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[alex51324]

Deelaundry asked for "In the Threesome universe, they meet another threesome and have dinner or a barbecue or something. Something that two couples would do, only it's two threesomes."

I couldn't quite make that work, but decided to try something where they go to a BDSM social event...only I chickened out and made it just a regular party of BDSM

Comments

[chaoskir]

Uhm, funny stuff. I think there is a lot potential for more chapter. I love the way you describe the relationship between the three. Thank you Alex. I would like it if you wrote more chapter to this story.

[hibernia1]

Reading this not expecting much, as you said (I can be as obedient as Chase, sometimes), I was happily surprised, i really like it!! It doesn't have an ending, as you already said, but it was still good to read! So thanks!

[alex51324]

reading it over, it does have more good moments than I initially remembered. I'd been working on the last page or so, and not making mcuh progress at all, for most of the evening, so I remembered it as being a very boring story--because I was bored, writing it! But it actually reads pretty well. Any ideas what might happen next?

[hibernia1]

Ah! Ideas! I have this wild fantasy of House reducing that Bill-person to a whimpering mess (I konw he can do that!) and then H/W/Ch leaving triumphantly and celebrate by making out... but this is just my dirty mind talking.

[overchay]

“What was wrong with that one?”

“Mulberry tree,” House answers.

“And those are…bad luck?” Wilson hazards.

Oh, Wilson. I loved this. But I love this series in general, so hey.

[alex51324]

Thanks, I liked that part too!

[dru_evilista]

Hee love! I really like this. It seemed really...real. Like the people and stuff. I lurk on a few BDSM groups online and yeah I sooo know the Bill type. Heh at least (so far? *evil grin*) there's none of the "if you're a sub clearly you're everyone's sub so I can order you around, "on your knees bitch!" types. I liked Anne and Hannah. They sound nice. Oh and I looooved the Chase mildly scolding House on not touching anyone, and minding the rules at the party.

[poeia]

Oooh. Now there's a good sequel. Bill trying to order Chase around. House would just love that.

There's a lot of good stuff here. I enjoyed it a lot.

Hannah-Anne-Max. Are they the Hannah and Max from Sleeping Dogs Lie?

[starhanyou]

"Oooh. Now there's a good sequel. Bill trying to order Chase around."

Or Wilson! I can almost see the sharp edge of House's tongue alone revealing Bill as a total sub.

[alex51324]

Oh, crap, I knew there was a reason those names came to me in a set. No, the Max in this story is a guy.

[daisylily]

Oh, I like that a lot. I wasn't expecting to think that much of it, after your disclaimer ;P but it's really fun. I want to know what happens next, which is always a good sign. Is House going to have a little talk with Bill?

*also waiting patiently for House's prostate exam*