Sensible Heart_Part 5

[aleksiina_26]

Title: Sensible Heart

Chapter: 5/5

Pairing: Tora x Shou, implied Tora x Saga

Rating: R to NC-17, for this one, NC-17

Genre: AU sorta, angst

Warnings: male x male, gore, sorta AU, foul language, sex, angst, character death.

Summary: What happens after all that you've ever known is gone? You try to move on, with every fibre of your being.

Comments: And here

Comments

[muohcu_t]

God, this story has touched my heart.
The emotions... God.
I can't even express myself properly.
Absolutely loved the whole story.

About the epilogue: I don't really feel like I need one, but it's up to you in the end.

[aleksiina_26]

Ah those comments are the best...my goal when writing fic is to make them feel, and think and react, and whenever someone comments that my story has touched them heart-deep...whoa! Its giving me a reason to keep writing. Thank you so much :) If I write an epilogue, it would probably be a follow up years down the line. I have ideas but nothing written yet. If everyone decided that an epilogue would be overkill then I'll just write it for myself...Thanks again xoxo

[himenojigoku]

I want an epilogue! (^_^)/ I feel warm and fuzzy now~! I love Mugen no Hana but, Mugen Electric Eden is my favorite :) I guess I can forgive you for making me cry now that you gave me a happy ending LOL You are a very good writer! I need to strive to be better than you! :D Excuse me if I ramble~that lemon was absolutely delicious!!! You always seem to capture emotions completely. Teach me your ways~!

[aleksiina_26]

OMFG Mugen electric eden is my all time favourite I think, the version from untitled vandalism...jdjssnfvdklshjDIES!!! It was a contest between the two at one point, but the lyrics from Mugen no Hana worked like 100% with the story so I ended up choosing that one. But I agree with Mugen electric eden 1000% its the song I listen to the most from A9. I'd be happy to beta and give you pointers. I never offer to beta entire stories because english isnt my mother tongue and I'm afraid to fuck up, although my stories are un-betaed and theyre ok I guess...anyway! But I could totally give you pointers if you'd like. Thanks for the sweet comment I'm happy you loved it ;) xoxo

[himenojigoku]

Well I only know one version^^ but I agree *DIES* It's one of my favorite songs from them! For me though, it's #2 right under SLEEPWALKER :) I already have a beta but, I would love if you read over my work sometime. I've been writing fanfiction for 3 years and reading A LOT LONGER. lol I think your english is perfect! I spy no errors anywhere! Fooled me! ^_^

[aleksiina_26]

Thank you so much :D And Sleepwalker...OMFG I love you lololol we like all the same songs XD Tora in that video...bvhdobafhuoba!!! Its one of my favourite looks for him (along with Hana, cross game and gemini) although Tora is always fucking hot...So its hard for me even say I have a favourite look...lets say I'm partial to it lol XD

[shou_ni]

I'm crying so much right now.
I really loved Tora and Shou helping Shizuka to give birth, it was really endearing. The love making was both sweet and hot too.
But the ending *crying* with works so well with mugen to hana, I kept thinking that the ending would have someone die, but instead it was lovely and perfect and have tears streaming down my face.
thank you for writing this, it was amazing, so sad it's come to an end.

[iyka_09]

Hell yeah! i definitely would love to read the epilogue... i'm really really really happy you have given an ending so beautiful and full of pure unadulterated love... i love you so much for this.... i read your words and my tears just flowed that i have to hide my face or my family might think i have gone insane... it's really so beautiful, especially the part where tora played the guitar and shou sang reminiscing their past, it was like i was there inside shou's heart... oh, i'm gonna cry again... God how i love you.... thank you so much darling... you don't know how much you made me happy....

[eimininja]

Oh this was the most beautiful chapter ever I loved it thank you so so much for writing and posting it I will miss it XD