Title: Silver and Gold
Chapter: 2/2 [Oneshot]
Pairing: Tora x OFC (lol…I'm going to fanfic hell for this)
Rating: NC-17
Genre: PWP
Warnings: male x female, explicit oral sex, intercourse, foul language, adult themes
Summary: Tora is looking for something to relieve his restlessness while on tour, so he goes on a bit of a solitary nightly adventure that
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Where do I begin with this one? I was so proud of you for posting it! I have no idea why het gets all the hate. A well written het scene is preferable to a poorly written yaoi any day. ^^ And this, my dear, was some fucking awesome sex!
I looooved your description of Clara! I have a bit of a soft spot for older women, myself... and the way you described her, self-confident and sensual was really fantastic. I really enjoyed the interaction between the two, and the way they kind of play off of each other. Really a spectacular job.
The sex was hot. And I don't care what rabid fangirls will say, good sex is good sex dammit! >_< All the little details, the rich environments... just.. *sigh*
As always, great work, darling!
Now I should probably pay attention to the small child running around the house, and not be reading porn (I'll end up reading it again tonight) *should never be a parent*
xoxo
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Lol, I've been feeling down as the big 2-5 birthday is approaching... but, you know... maybe some of those sweet, young, baby-face, up and coming j-rockers have a thing for older women too. (^_~) Hmm... 35, huh? I totally believe that. :3 Nice to have something to look forward too in my thirties, I suppose. :P
Pffft, you had nothing to worry about there! I reiterate... the sex was amazing. I hate that writers are so scared to put a little het oral in their stories! (I too am guilty of this... but I'm not all that great with sex scenes in general, super graphic ones, anyway). It's agreed than, het porn is hot and we need more of this hotness. (aren't most j-rock fans bi anyway? (笑) Stop complaining, bitches!)
lol! The exorcist while babysitting! Hopefully you didn't try to perform one. ;D
Yeah... I've been porn deprived, okay?? I've been so busy at work I haven't had time to do anything else... anything... if you get my drift. *dies*
xoxo
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Seriously, that scene was just ON FIRE. It was just bristling with urgency, need and mutual pleasure - you could feel what both of them were experiencing. Especially the first part, where he just pulls off her panties and tongues her into a frenzy - very wild, very vividly written and very, very erotic ( ... )
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I can see why you want to put Tora with an older man or woman, too. He's one of the more mature members of the band (despite putting up with Alice Nine Channel craziness every month), so it's very fitting to put him with somebody who brings out that side of him. It's a very fitting pairing.
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I just wrote another older woman ofc in my latest kb, its definitely a good match for my tiger boy XD I'm rather eager to write my entries featuring the gorgeous Atsushi Sakurai, those are gonna be steamy as hell!
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I'll give you a better comment tomorrow XD
Glad you shared this with us!!
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Ugh, please write novels. Please. I'm jealous of how amazing you are at writing.
I love Saga in this, even though his appearance is tiny. He's so freaking ridiculous. And Shou being jealous... mmmmmmm
Now. I think the ending with the book was just absolutely PERFECT. Gods... Him reading and then calling her... UNF.
Clara was utter perfection. She's a real, developed character. <3 Beautiful, older and foreign, and I like how that's part of the attraction to Tora.
The genkan scene was just... Yeah, I think I died a little. <3
YAY. Another winner, girl. :3
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the character is beautifully interesting and I really liked the plot (and the smut, lucky woman)
The compatibility between the two was also amazing ;)
good job!! ^^
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She IS a lucky woman isn't she...oral sex from Tora...*drools everywhere* lol I really had a lot of fun building the chemistry between then, I'm glad you enjoyed that too ;) Thank you so much for reading and commenting xoxo
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