Kink Bingo_Wildcard [Anonymity] Part 2

Aug 02, 2012 19:30


Title: Silver and Gold

Chapter: 2/2 [Oneshot]

Pairing: Tora x OFC (lol…I'm going to fanfic hell for this)

Rating: NC-17

Genre: PWP

Warnings: male x female, explicit oral sex, intercourse, foul language, adult themes

Summary: Tora is looking for something to relieve his restlessness while on tour, so he goes on a bit of a solitary nightly adventure that ( Read more... )

alice nine, kink bingo, tora, oneshot, ofc, fanfiction, smut, pwp

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sciencesaves August 3 2012, 02:17:51 UTC
Pheeeeww!

Where do I begin with this one? I was so proud of you for posting it! I have no idea why het gets all the hate. A well written het scene is preferable to a poorly written yaoi any day. ^^ And this, my dear, was some fucking awesome sex!

I looooved your description of Clara! I have a bit of a soft spot for older women, myself... and the way you described her, self-confident and sensual was really fantastic. I really enjoyed the interaction between the two, and the way they kind of play off of each other. Really a spectacular job.

The sex was hot. And I don't care what rabid fangirls will say, good sex is good sex dammit! >_< All the little details, the rich environments... just.. *sigh*
As always, great work, darling!
Now I should probably pay attention to the small child running around the house, and not be reading porn (I'll end up reading it again tonight) *should never be a parent*
xoxo

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aleksiina_26 August 3 2012, 13:29:47 UTC
*blushes* thank you :D Het has a bad rep what can I say, probably because of the hordes of terrible mary-sue characters in pretty much every fandom imaginable. But to put it in the words of my good friend K, also a fic writer, "I'll take ten mary-sues over mpreg any day" XD ( ... )

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sciencesaves August 4 2012, 18:54:33 UTC
(笑) Oh my, I -do- agree with that statement. mpreg is -not- my cup of tea!
Lol, I've been feeling down as the big 2-5 birthday is approaching... but, you know... maybe some of those sweet, young, baby-face, up and coming j-rockers have a thing for older women too. (^_~) Hmm... 35, huh? I totally believe that. :3 Nice to have something to look forward too in my thirties, I suppose. :P

Pffft, you had nothing to worry about there! I reiterate... the sex was amazing. I hate that writers are so scared to put a little het oral in their stories! (I too am guilty of this... but I'm not all that great with sex scenes in general, super graphic ones, anyway). It's agreed than, het porn is hot and we need more of this hotness. (aren't most j-rock fans bi anyway? (笑) Stop complaining, bitches!)

lol! The exorcist while babysitting! Hopefully you didn't try to perform one. ;D
Yeah... I've been porn deprived, okay?? I've been so busy at work I haven't had time to do anything else... anything... if you get my drift. *dies*
xoxo

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aleksiina_26 August 5 2012, 04:50:07 UTC
Eurgh, I'm also turning the big 2-5 in november, fml. And the only thing I'm really looking forward to as I age is specifically that: banging some hot young studs with loads of stamina XD I'm so gonna be a cougar later looool XD ( ... )

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puss_nd_boots August 3 2012, 02:55:18 UTC
Three words: That. Was. HOT.

Seriously, that scene was just ON FIRE. It was just bristling with urgency, need and mutual pleasure - you could feel what both of them were experiencing. Especially the first part, where he just pulls off her panties and tongues her into a frenzy - very wild, very vividly written and very, very erotic ( ... )

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aleksiina_26 August 3 2012, 14:04:36 UTC
Thank you! *blushes ( ... )

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puss_nd_boots August 4 2012, 21:29:07 UTC
Oh, there's a damn good reason female oral is taboo and blow jobs aren't. Most sex acts, be it intercourse or blow jobs, are about giving pleasure to the man. Female oral, whether performed by a man or a woman, is all about HER pleasure, HER orgasm. There's nothing in there for the guy to get off on, other than getting turned on by pleasing his partner. Hence, it freaks guys out, and they slap a taboo on it.

I can see why you want to put Tora with an older man or woman, too. He's one of the more mature members of the band (despite putting up with Alice Nine Channel craziness every month), so it's very fitting to put him with somebody who brings out that side of him. It's a very fitting pairing.

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aleksiina_26 August 5 2012, 04:54:35 UTC
Eurgh, I hate having male-indoctrinated taboos fucking me over all the way to frickin jrock porn. POSTS ALL THE HET ORAL SEX!!!! YOLO! *runs off screaming* (its late here and I just posted some monstrous kb entry, a little crazy atm XD)

I just wrote another older woman ofc in my latest kb, its definitely a good match for my tiger boy XD I'm rather eager to write my entries featuring the gorgeous Atsushi Sakurai, those are gonna be steamy as hell!

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xme_chanx August 3 2012, 07:06:22 UTC
I'm half-asleep, so I'll probably write a better comment later, but this was GOOD. A well-written OFC is a wonderful thing. <3

I'll give you a better comment tomorrow XD
Glad you shared this with us!!

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aleksiina_26 August 3 2012, 14:06:11 UTC
Yay! I can't wait to hear your thoughts :D xoxo

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xme_chanx August 5 2012, 18:13:16 UTC
I guess it's a good sign that I'm still tongue-tied over this? XD
Ugh, please write novels. Please. I'm jealous of how amazing you are at writing.

I love Saga in this, even though his appearance is tiny. He's so freaking ridiculous. And Shou being jealous... mmmmmmm
Now. I think the ending with the book was just absolutely PERFECT. Gods... Him reading and then calling her... UNF.

Clara was utter perfection. She's a real, developed character. <3 Beautiful, older and foreign, and I like how that's part of the attraction to Tora.
The genkan scene was just... Yeah, I think I died a little. <3
YAY. Another winner, girl. :3

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aleksiina_26 August 7 2012, 03:17:50 UTC
Oh I'm so flattered *blushes and squeals* I try my best ^_ ( ... )

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myrto_23 August 3 2012, 08:19:43 UTC
Wah loved it!
the character is beautifully interesting and I really liked the plot (and the smut, lucky woman)
The compatibility between the two was also amazing ;)
good job!! ^^

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aleksiina_26 August 3 2012, 14:08:22 UTC
Thank you so much :D

She IS a lucky woman isn't she...oral sex from Tora...*drools everywhere* lol I really had a lot of fun building the chemistry between then, I'm glad you enjoyed that too ;) Thank you so much for reading and commenting xoxo

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alohalife August 3 2012, 19:26:25 UTC
Oh my! That fic was smoky hot! You know, I envy that woman in the story.

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aleksiina_26 August 5 2012, 04:55:47 UTC
As I was writing I was going "eurgh, why not meeee!" I make myself jealous with my own stories XD Thank you so much for stopping by, I'm glad you enjoyed :D xoxo

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alohalife August 5 2012, 18:55:26 UTC
Well, there's no way for me not to enjoy a story like this :D

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