Kink Bingo_Wildcard [Anonymity] Part 2
Title: Silver and Gold
Chapter: 2/2 [Oneshot]
Pairing: Tora x OFC (lol…I'm going to fanfic hell for this)
Rating: NC-17
Genre: PWP
Warnings: male x female, explicit oral sex, intercourse, foul language, adult themes
Summary: Tora is looking for something to relieve his restlessness while on tour, so he goes on a bit of a solitary nightly adventure that ( Read more... )
Seriously, that scene was just ON FIRE. It was just bristling with urgency, need and mutual pleasure - you could feel what both of them were experiencing. Especially the first part, where he just pulls off her panties and tongues her into a frenzy - very wild, very vividly written and very, very erotic.
The setup and conclusion were beautifully written, too - you made your female character a lot more than a cipher (and kudos for making her an older, professional woman instead of a young fangirl, it actually made her a lot more relatable). She's Tora's match in every way - tall, beautiful, sexy, smart, and a bit of a loner - and the mental image of the two of them together is really, REALLY hot.
The little bits about Shou getting pissy with Tora were hilarious (it's very obvious that he is, indeed, jealous). And I loved the motives each of them had for being in that bar - neither was looking for the evening to end like it did, but it turned out to be a good thing for them both. The ending was fantastic, too - that it turned out to be a hell of a lot more than a one-night stand. She got something permanent out of it, and I like how it ended with the suggestion that they kept seeing each other occasionally afterward.
So, yes, your courageous leap into the fangirl no-no zone was successful as hell. You've given me encouragement to move forward with the OFC stories of my own I've been planning. Nice job, as always!
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That scene was the part I was worried about, the explicit oral sex. Its hilarious how we can casually write about blowjobs but when it comes to female oral, it becomes very taboo and not so casual. I hesitated quite a bit to put that scene in there but I ended up giving in to that visual in my mind, him on his knees, her leg thrown over his shoulder...*drools* I mean, I was gonna post het anyway, might as well write whatever the fuck I want XD
Oddly enough, I pretty much always picture Tora with a sexy older woman, or man. There's this vibe about him, idk lol XD It made sense for me to write an independent older lady as his partner in there, self confident, mature, sensual, all aspects that made their interactions burn much hotter and brighter than with a virginal fangirl. I wanted this to be about the sex, and what better way than picture a woman with years of experience on her side. There will be another older woman very soon, in my master-slaves square, but I will not be revealing too much *grins*
I had to include some pissy Shou and pervert Saga in there XD a bit of comic relief to cut through the sexual tension. This fic was very much about releasing tension, spontaneity and of course the appeal of the unknown, the unexpected. I just had to include that little bit about the book at the end, it was too good to pass up, and besides, its a good way to shed a positive light on those casual encounters. Who knows what you'll be able to get from them in the end? It could be a lot more than just sex, and it their case it was.
It was scary, but I'm glad I took the leap. I'm not expecting anything from this one but so far the response is positive, and if I can open doors for some people, than that's more I could ever hope for. Thanks for your support as always ;) xoxo
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I can see why you want to put Tora with an older man or woman, too. He's one of the more mature members of the band (despite putting up with Alice Nine Channel craziness every month), so it's very fitting to put him with somebody who brings out that side of him. It's a very fitting pairing.
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I just wrote another older woman ofc in my latest kb, its definitely a good match for my tiger boy XD I'm rather eager to write my entries featuring the gorgeous Atsushi Sakurai, those are gonna be steamy as hell!
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