Solvents and Cigarettes_Part 3

Apr 22, 2012 22:19


Solvents and Cigarettes

Chapter: 3/?

Pairing: Tora x Saga

Rating: NC-17 (overall)

Genre: AU, Romance

Warnings: AU, male x male, adult themes, age difference, coarse language.

Summary: Saga is an art student. Tora teaches painting. Sparks fly.

Comment: I've been a little busy, but here is the new chapter! Yay! I finally managed to spare some time, I hope ( Read more... )

chaptered, tora x saga, fanfiction, alice nine, au, angst

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clawsgalore April 23 2012, 20:48:23 UTC
Late again! Sorry about that...
but this chapter is very dreamy indeed... tora and saga in a coffee shop, the plitter platter of rain, the entire atmosphere was very dream-like in a way, very serene :D i can completely see that scene in a movie, complete with grayscale colours and stuff :D
And yay shoupon! Maybe slutty!shou will finally settle down :D or perhaps his ways will be an obstacle in their relationship :D
Can't wait to read more!

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aleksiina_26 April 25 2012, 15:55:00 UTC
I'm late replying so its all good XD RL is so crazy lately -___-

That coffee shop scene was very vivid in my mind as I wrote it, I think that's why there's this really true to life quality to it.

I'm definitely not making it too easy for Slutty!Shou either XD Their courtship will be a bit of comic relief in the background I think ^_^ Thanks for stopping by and commenting xoxo

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boys_love_boys April 24 2012, 06:26:27 UTC
Ah, read the past two chapters finally to procrastinate on writing a paper. Hahaha~ If only school were as interesting as it is for Saga. =n=~~~

I like the light sweetness this story has so far. I'm a fan of building things up at a good pace rather than dumping everything on at once. Can't wait to see where it goes between them. I'm sure it won't be an easy path, given their teacher/student relationship. Perfect, bwahahaha!

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aleksiina_26 April 25 2012, 16:00:15 UTC
Phew I finally have the time to reply, yikes, RL is being such a demanding bitch lately -___- And if only we could have Tora as a teacher for at least one day...gods, he could teach me anything XD

I usually write oneshots where I "dump everything there" rather quickly, but I like to take my time with chaptered works. And I think the build up is important in this particular situation, considering the whole teacher/student thing. There might be a bit of heartache coming up...

Thanks for stopping by and commenting, I really appreciate it considering you're a busy student yourself ;) Take care xoxo

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witch_chameleon April 24 2012, 09:19:17 UTC
Hi! How are you? I read last night, and although promised, stop in the middle, could not, and I read it completely. I loved it! <3 made ​​my heart throb strong, but that as situations are providing. First Saga could not move and was about Torah, to give you a form to follow, one way, and OMG! were so close that even I could not breathe. But when Torah invites you to bring it home, is something that as a student I lived (and which would have God because my profession is as Tora XDD) and will generate nerve to say, just a gesture of kindness, but could not do it and leave. Saga Of course you add the coffee and GOD! paste the fuss ... I can ask you something, that Tora speaks in French, I would die nn Sorry that's a personal taste, but hey, when Saga gets home and talks with Shou that he fell in love, my heart skipped a beat! man! Please! There will be some ShouxHiroto? how nice! I love this couple so the hope ñ.ñ. But now I'm dying to know as continuous! I hope you will follow soon!! Please ñ.ñ!

Thanks for writing! Take care! BYE ~!

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aleksiina_26 April 25 2012, 16:05:52 UTC
Hello my dear! Doing great, very busy though -___-

I'm happy this chapter got close to your heart :D Its the start of their courtship, and I can't wait to see where it will take us. You had a teacher offer you a ride home as well? It happened to me to XD And I said no lol because I had a bit of a crush on the teacher and I thought it was really improper to say yes XD But Saga is not like me ;) I may have Tora speak a little french (I think its very sexy also...) I love the scene where Saga tells Shou that he's in love, its emotional yet very funny as well ^_^ There will be a bit of ShouPon in the background, just for fun...

Thanks for reading and commenting my darling xoxo

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saga_92 April 24 2012, 09:53:15 UTC
uwaaaa!!! I really love this story! xDD

you did such an AWESOME writing! *hug*

the coffee was brilliant idea xD and i always love this pairing too much!
thank you for this :D

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aleksiina_26 April 25 2012, 16:07:02 UTC
Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting :D This pairing is also a favourite of mine, I hope you will enjoy the next chapters :D xoxo

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aleksiina_26 April 25 2012, 16:10:10 UTC
Cute Saga is cute XD Thats just how I imagine him, sexy as hell one second and super awkward the next. I think that's why I just love him so much XD

Its going slowly but I'm pretty sure things will start picking up the next chapter...There might be a little bit of heartache, but nothing too serious ;)

I always love your comments babe, always relevant imo XD Take care sweetheart xoxo

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