Solvents and Cigarettes_Part 3

Apr 22, 2012 22:19


Solvents and Cigarettes

Chapter: 3/?

Pairing: Tora x Saga

Rating: NC-17 (overall)

Genre: AU, Romance

Warnings: AU, male x male, adult themes, age difference, coarse language.

Summary: Saga is an art student. Tora teaches painting. Sparks fly.

Comment: I've been a little busy, but here is the new chapter! Yay! I finally managed to spare some time, I hope ( Read more... )

chaptered, tora x saga, fanfiction, alice nine, au, angst

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shou_ni April 23 2012, 08:48:02 UTC
Have I met him? And by met him you know I mean heard him moan through my wall at three in the morning…" Oh god I snorted so hard it was ridiculous.

This was such an awesome chapter, you really did set a dreamy scene in the coffee shop, it felt like I was there with them *sighs*. I find myself really routing for Tora to just take Saga and elope to New York or something.
I can get over how funny Saga and Shou's interactions are in every chapter, damn you're good!
Can't wait for your next update xoxo

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aleksiina_26 April 23 2012, 19:03:41 UTC
Gotta love my Slutty!Shou and Snarky!Saga XD They make awesome roommates don't they? I really love writing the dialogue for those two, it just comes out sarcastic naturally ;)

I really love the coffee shop scene, its all soft and dreamy and intimate...*sighs* And girl...don't you be guessing all my plot twists XD I'll try to update as soon as I can. Take care of yourself and thanks for reading, as always xoxo

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shou_ni April 23 2012, 19:56:11 UTC
If I could take that scene in the coffee shop.. and make it my life, I gladly would girl.
Oh honey, Ima jump in your head and guess all yo plots, just like you did with my kinks when writing your threesome fics ;D xoxo

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fallen_am_i April 23 2012, 09:22:39 UTC
"And then there's a silence, as if Tora was weighing his words, but rather than saying anything, he leans over and gives him a soft,"

Kiki: KISS KISS KISS!!!!!!! yES HE KISSES HIM HAAAAAAAAA!!!!

"one armed hug. "

*calms down and wipes her sweat* xD

MY BABY IS IN LOVE 8DDDDDDD Well, how couldnlt he, I have fallen for yout Tora in this chapter, independant and so free spirited, *sigh*

And now that my spirits are up, going to study >.> I promised to type only after finishing studying per day D8 *that much desperate to find a motivation* xD

Excellent work dear! :3

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aleksiina_26 April 23 2012, 19:12:45 UTC
I may have written that scene to purposefully fool everyone into thinking that there was a kiss coming up XD But NOOOOO! you pervert...XD I'm taking it easy with these two, nice and slow, with a lengthy courtship that will make the first kiss very meaningful. Things should start picking up in the next chapter...

And who wouldn't fall in love with my artist-Tora...he's got everything one would wish for in a man, I'm not making it easy for Saga to resist him XD I hope you had a good study session my dear, thanks for reading xoxo

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eimininja April 23 2012, 13:15:11 UTC
An update! \( ^0^ )/ Seeing updates of this fic is like receiving a huge gift or something for me...I love it soooo much <3
Naughty Tora, he really shouldn't have done that, bringing Saga to a coffee shop and such things, but damn they just love each other so much, he really cannot help it. I love how they are growing closer. And Shoupon <3

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aleksiina_26 April 23 2012, 19:19:08 UTC
Whoa thanks! *blushes* I'm glad you see it as a gift, its really flattering to me thank you so much!

I know, Tora is evil XD But he means no harm, he only wants to get closer to the object of his affections ;) I'm definitely taking my time with the courtship, but it should pick up in the next chapter...

There will be some background ShouPon to keep us all entertained as well ;) Thanks for taking the time to read and comment I really appreciate it xoxo

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ruruu April 23 2012, 14:33:55 UTC
Yaaaay another update!! <3
Thank you so much for this!!
I giggled when Tora said he lived in Berlin too, cause I am from Germany (^з^)
Don't know anything about the art scene in Berlin though. When I have been to galleries then mostly in Goethe's hometown Weimar. I think I have seen japanese guys there too. (Well they are all crazy about Goethe and stuff)
I also loved Shou's reaction on Saga laughing like some crazy person haha would have reacted the same. Ohhh and Shou is going to go on a date with Hiroto!! So cute!
I am very curious! Please write more soon <3

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aleksiina_26 April 23 2012, 19:34:21 UTC
No wayyyyy! There's awesome modern art galleries in Berlin, like a bunch of them! The Berlin CFA, Eigen + Art, Upstairs Berlin and Galerie Wohnmaschine are just a few of the cutting edge ones that display amazing contemporary art, from german and international artists. If you like art, definitely check those out! And there's tons more! I was really picturing a young, student Tora walking down tiny streets and being amazed at everything (and probably speaking in horribly mangled german XD)

I'm adding a bit of ShouPon backstory for fun ;) And I just love writing Shou in this, he's hilarious! I will try to write more as soon as I can, thanks for reading and commenting xoxo

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ruruu April 23 2012, 21:01:51 UTC
You are so well informed ⊂((・x・))⊃
I think that is why reading your stories is so much fun!!
Student Tora must have been sexy and cute too <3

Take your time <3

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aleksiina_26 April 25 2012, 15:52:02 UTC
Hehe its because I really love contemporary art ;) And crazy about researching my facts properly lol

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aleksiina_26 April 23 2012, 19:44:35 UTC
Yayyyy I'm happy it made you feel better :D How is life on vitamin V right now? I hope you're not feeling too loopy, I know what its like -____-

Its a legit drawing/painting tip for measurements and proportions, just that teachers don't usually...ahem...get all up-close and personal with you when they show it XD I guess the tiger couldn't resist getting closer to his prey...Its innocent but it isn't at the same time. He's aware that he has feelings, and that he can't really show them because of their situation, but he can't help it...*sighs*

The coffee shop scene is just like a scene from a movie XD I pictured it in my mind so clearly, it was easy to write. I was gonna make it a little sexier but stopped myself because I really want to build this like a real relationship, one step at a time. So its nice and slow but I have a feeling the speed will pick up in the next chapter...

I'm glad it relieved you from a bit of your boredom, poor sweetie, I wish I wrote faster -___- Take care my dear, I'll try to write more as soon as I can

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sciencesaves April 24 2012, 01:21:12 UTC
T____T soooo loopy! Sometimes I kind of snap out of it, and then have to hurry and check if I posted anything crazy in my stupor! lol... it's like a walking dream most of the time. Scary... I've started weaning off the big-boys and am trying to survive on the weaker painkillers... but it's difficult! I'll have to take a picture of the fucking huge bruise on my chest!

Ahhh, I knew it had to be a real tip, you wrote it so effortlessly and believably!
Mmm, I love the kind of...coyness you write with in this chapter. Just teasing us readers so much! (>_<)

Take your time, this story needs time to marinate! (笑)
xoxo

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