Edally Academy Chapter Nine Beta - To Our Successes, May they Be Written Forever

[aldersprig]

“Well, you did pretty well

Comments

[rix_scaedu]

“Did you hear they got a goat up her last year?” - "her" = 'here' [As written, it could be a rude joke...]

Ooooh! Plot! A good thing that Taikie took the time to hang over the rail or they would have been closer...

[aldersprig]

Yeah, there's going to be a lot of typos. I'm writing fast, not editing much at all, and using an unfamiliar keyboard.

Plot twists good!

[rix_scaedu]

If they had been closer and too badly hurt to get themselves down, how long would it have taken anyone to find them?

Also, Mechanics class might have been cancelled...

[aldersprig]

probably about 30 minutes, tops.

[eseme]

Mad scientists! And that is the issue with them, always having stuff blow up.

Bitrani males are Bitrani males no matter the time period, I see. It works, and his attitude about it works very well.

I like this setting.

[aldersprig]

Whoops, didn't lock this one. But thank you.

[eseme]

You're welcome. I'll enjoy reading it when it is out of Beta. I didn't volunteer because I am always along a week or more late, but will read the finished product.