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aldersprig

Edally Academy Chapter Nine Beta - To Our Successes, May they Be Written Forever

Nov 14, 2013 06:29

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rix_scaedu November 14 2013, 16:46:45 UTC

“Did you hear they got a goat up her last year?” - "her" = 'here' [As written, it could be a rude joke...]

Ooooh! Plot! A good thing that Taikie took the time to hang over the rail or they would have been closer...

aldersprig November 14 2013, 16:47:51 UTC

Yeah, there's going to be a lot of typos. I'm writing fast, not editing much at all, and using an unfamiliar keyboard.

Plot twists good!

rix_scaedu November 14 2013, 16:51:38 UTC

If they had been closer and too badly hurt to get themselves down, how long would it have taken anyone to find them?

Also, Mechanics class might have been cancelled...

aldersprig November 14 2013, 16:53:45 UTC

probably about 30 minutes, tops.

rix_scaedu November 14 2013, 16:59:28 UTC

Good to know that someone would have thought to check up there.

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