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[albion1919]

Title: Girlfriend. Part 2.

Characters: Gabriel/Eden.

Rating: R.

Word count: 2,740

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: AU. Eden is a callgirl in this fic and Gabriel her "client"

Note: I may put this on hold and come back to it.

Parts: 1, 2, 3

Comments

[gimmemypickle]

YAY, FIRST! *is pathetic*

This fic is wonderful! It has this great creepy yet sweet undertone (if that makes any sense). You're so good at messing with my head. <3

[albion1919]

LOL!

Ahh thank you! Yep that was what I was aiming for, creepy/sweet, one of those will weigh more heavily later on I guess.

[ilovetbag24]

OMG, I love the sweetness/insecurity/uncomfortableness of Gabriel! He's so adorable and sweet and he feels like he's not worthy of anybody, let alone a beautiful girl like Eden! I'm really starting to get into this! Can't wait for more!!

[albion1919]

\o/ thank you hon!! I feel bad now because I'm going to step back from it for a wee while, sort out what way it will go. But I will finish it!

:)

[razycrandomgirl]

“Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain…”

I always say that. I love that saying!

Sweet and woobie and then he doesn't tell her about the secret bed roomf. Muahaha.

Poor locked away Eden.

[albion1919]

I love that quote and I think it fits him, another man behind the curtain operating the mask...

Oh yes, that room has it's uses. But like I said I'm putting this on the backburner to figure out what direction to take it (and do more KW verse and Maybriel :x)

[razycrandomgirl]

another man behind the curtain operating the mask...
So true.

(and do more KW verse and Maybriel :x)

I was about to saw "'KW'? what's that?" And then I figured it out and Squeed really loud. :D

Let me know if I can help in anyway with anything. *hugs*

[albion1919]

Oops, sorry. Being lazy and couldn't be bothered to type it all out :P

Thank you, I’ll let you know. (I'm starting the lift fic now)

[albion1919]

Thank you! I will come back to it but I want to be sure what direction to take creepy or not. *guilty* Tis true my mindset is more Saya at the moment but I still love this ship, that hasn't changed :)

[force_oblique]

Wow, this is just amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this fiction, it is amazing and the way you describe it almost gives me the chills but in a good way!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[albion1919]

Weee thank you!! Chills are all good! :p

[force_oblique]

Hehe thats my motto too! :)