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[albion1919]

 Title: Pollen.

Characters: Gabriel/Eden.

Rating: PG-13

Word count: 1,469

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: Gabriel's first Valentine

Note: It's cheesy and fluffy but today calls for it! :P

It was all meant to go smoothly, their first Valentine’s day together. As the 14th drew closer Gabriel grew increasingly agitated, or as Eden said like he was “shiting

Comments

[gimmemypickle]

LMAO, this is adorable! I love your characterizations, especially how you mentioned Gabriel had it all planned a week ahead. LMAO, the plot is hilarious! I hope he learned that the only acceptable present is chocolate. Or is that just me? ;-x

“I thought the flowers had made you bed written?” I'm not sure, but I think it's bedridden.

their fist Valentine’s day together. Forgot your r in first.

Another awesome fic, Tammy! :-)

[albion1919]

Thank you!!! The answer is always chocolate, yes ;)

Ohh thanks, I really should be more careful :)

*hugs*

[fifmeister]

Awww! I'm not a big Valentine's Day fan, but this was cute. :) I can totally see Gabe getting all worried about V-Day and planning every little detail out in advance, hehe.

One teeny little nitpick on something I noticed...Eden saying they should "go to the cinema" seemed a little weird to me. I think that's a bit of a British-ism. I don't recall ever hearing anybody here use that phrase; we usually say "go to the movie theater" or "go see a movie" or something like that. Of course, I've never lived in New York or LA, so maybe people there do say "cinema." Anyway, just thought I'd mention it. :p

[albion1919]

Thanks! Neither am I but fluff called me :P

Oh thanks, obviously been lazy today and didn’t proofread enough lol :)

[lacrymosa_star]

I LOVED IT!!! THE FLUFF WAS GREAT!!! ♥ Why can't Gabriel ever really be happy except in fics!!!???

[albion1919]

THANK YOU!!! Aww he was happy when he finished his watch, lol :D

[albion1919]

Thanks m'dear!!!! He did, bless him. She got some when they went out *shifty eyes* XD XD

I think they both did, he's so one of those people that would say bless you every time ^_^

[ilovetbag24]

Aww, what a cute fluffy Valentine's Fic!! This was awesome!! Loved it!! Poor Gabriel! Just wanted to make Eden's Valentine's Day special! She should've told him straight up she was allergic!! But it was so sweet! Why can't I have a Gabriel in my life this Valentine's Day?

[albion1919]

Inspired by our talk! (I can mention you at the top if you like?) She should have been more clear! Poor Gabe, he tries. I know, if only *sigh* a sane version though please XD

[ilovetbag24]

Don't worry about it, baby girl! I'm just glad our talk brought out a cute fluffy Valentine's Day fic!! Aww, Gabriel does try...and that's all that matters! What an awesome boyfriend he'd make!!

[albion1919]

I'm glad it did to! Ooooh Gabe.. *sigh*