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[albion1919]

Title: Subterfuge, Chapter Five.

Characters: Eden/Sylar

Rating: NC-17. Graphic sex and bondage themes.

Word Count: 3,085.

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: Eden is living next door to Chandra Suresh. She begins to suspect Sylar‘s involvement in his life.

Note: Fifth chap. Still Just smut again but also the last chapter.

The vinegar was cloying in such a

Comments

[sarahetc]

OMFG. Just, OMFG!!!

razycrandomgirl sent me an email today saying that I absolutely had to read this story and wow was she not kidding. Read all four preceding chapter, too. Set up was great, good tension build. I love the way you've characterized them both, and the dance they're doing around one another. And chapter four was so hot, so incredibly hot.

And then I read this and just had to sit here in shock for awhile, mouth hanging open the whole bit. Cos for a minute there, you had Sylar shouting, "Sarah!" over and over again. I may actually die of the hotness. Amazing!

I have to go read that Sarahsarahsarah bit a frillion more times, now.

[albion1919]

*goes red*

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the characterisation. Sylar's a toughie.

Dude, I got bit by the smut bug and now I can't stop writing it! More of it in the future, to be sure XD

I just realised that your name is Sarah! I would be fainting if he was calling out my name.

Teehee.

[sarahetc]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the characterisation. Sylar's a toughie.

Isn't he though? It's the juxtaposition of power and vulnerability, I think. He's so full of rage and power, yet so completely vulnerable. And in a way that's less jekyll/hyde and more madonna/whore. If that makes sense. And it probably doesn't, so I'll hush now!

Dude, I got bit by the smut bug and now I can't stop writing it! More of it in the future, to be sure XD

Outstanding!

I just realised that your name is Sarah! I would be fainting if he was calling out my name.

I very nearly did. I read that and just sat there, breathing heavily, flushed, gobsmacked. I think I might have actually gone into shock. In a very good way.

[albion1919]

Sylar: It's keeping him balanced. You don't want him too bad, the reader and myself would feel alienated. But you don't want him to be too fluffy. Basically, my bottom line for him is that he's always Gabriel. Gabriel desperately acting out his fantasy of being Sylar. Which he does to an amazing, convincing level. Gabe should have been an actor!

I very nearly did. I read that and just sat there, breathing heavily, flushed, gobsmacked. I think I might have actually gone into shock. In a very good way.

Bwuahahaha! Cana said she got "a happy." I was originally like 'Whaaa?' I get it now though! ;)

[razycrandomgirl]

:x ahem ... this is book marked because I'm a big perv.:D

[albion1919]

Really? I never would have guessed... *giggle* XD

Thank you!! :D

how do you bookmark? Is it the same thing as Favourites?

[razycrandomgirl]

lol it's a good thing this thing doesn't have a counter, cause I've come to this page a good number of times ... maybe over fifty.

Fanks for the awesome tags Btw. No muss, no fuss! straight to the porn. MY FAVORITE! *is a huge perv for tam!smut* :D

[albion1919]

omg! Teeheee!! I haven't written smut in ages, I must do more *withdrawal systems*

Ta! Took awhile but it is much more easier having them.