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Title: Subterfuge, Chapter Five.
Characters: Eden/Sylar
Rating: NC-17. Graphic sex and bondage themes.
Word Count: 3,085.
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summery: Eden is living next door to Chandra Suresh. She begins to suspect Sylar‘s involvement in his life.
Note: Fifth chap. Still Just smut again but also the last chapter.
The vinegar was cloying in such a ( Read more... )
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She watched with surprise as the wolf like gleam gradually dripped from his eyes. His body seemed to hunch over slightly. He looked at her with subdued hurt. Eden’s mind whispered to her that he was very probably putting on an act, but her empathy, her heart simultaneously melted and expanded right down to the tips of her toes.
OMG, he's such a manipulative bastard!!!!
He striped her in the dark. Every piece of clothing removed for a name.
HOT.
For every letter you give me, I’ll keep going…”
:SLDkfja;sdlkfja;sldkfja;slkfjasd holy shit. Holy SHIT. Eden don't be dumb!! but I can't blame you! Oh my Jesus, I can't blame you!
“Can’t or won’t?” He was becoming suspicious, and rightly so. She’d been partly lying through her teeth.
OH. Eden you're smart. SMART! I'm sorry I called you a dumb bitch. LOL.
“Sarah Ellis!”
O.O ( ... )
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She suddenly found herself kissing him all over his face, hummingbird fast, before turning away to sleep. She caught his look of shock turning to pleasant bemusement as she did. They rested close, him lying behind her. There was no other alternative in such a small bed. She fell asleep with his arm snaked around her waist, and his soft breath by her ear. She drifted off.
was gorgeous. I love how you snuck some quality snuggles into an otherwise dark fic. Aww squee!
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Thank you love. I never knew I had it in me XD
OMG, he's such a manipulative bastard!!!!
Yep, but how the hell could you tell if he was fibbing or not? She doesn’t come out any cleaner either.
LOL omg Tammy that made me stop and crack up! LOL!!! :D
I had to get the invisible condom in there somewhere! :p
OMG at the reveal. The guilt!! if I were Eden I'd use my persuasion to make that wolf bastard forget. SERIOUSLY.
He had gone before she could do anything, just leaving her Harold. I did actually contemplate an extra scene. He comes back, kills Chandra. She finds the place turned over and goes to Sylar's. She finds him raving in his crazy room. He's just killed Chandra, tried to "persuade" him like she told him to.
But I thought that was waaaaaay to dark!
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I will check it out :)
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She tried to save the world with writing
R.I.P
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*mourns*
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okay so yeah that was awesome and beautiful and painful. I loved it! Aw man if you could just keep going on with this AU I'd be happy as a clam (clam WTF?).
I swear reading this made me twitch and there was even panting. :-X
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Thank you, that's a lovely thing to say! There was going to be an extra scene, three months later, but I thought it was a bit dark...
I’m thinking of doing some sort of Mohinder/Eden/Sylar or Gabriel love triangle next.
Weird in it? Why are clams happy??? XD
I swear reading this made me twitch and there was even panting. :-X
...In the happy place? (no, I’m not going to let that go XD)
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==o
Uh'm can we please go there? PLEASE!!!!
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