Okay, not all of them, but #36 does, badly. Everyone's OOC, and the ghostwriter doesn't seem to have gotten the message that "technobabble should probably lean towards the hard side of scifi, not the soft-like-an-overripe-banana" and "WAR IS BAD is a good message, but not the way YOU'RE writing it" and "jesus christ, evil Atlantian mutants who're
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You could go with generic flying though montage?
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After talking about it with Drake, I think I'm gonna start with Tobias hanging out with Ax and move them to a meeting~ and go heavy on internal dialogue and character interaction.
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It shows, sometimes. X3;; Some of them feel like bad fanfiction. (Some also feel like really good fanfiction, though!)
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