Dec 28, 2008 12:02
Okay, not all of them, but #36 does, badly. Everyone's OOC, and the ghostwriter doesn't seem to have gotten the message that "technobabble should probably lean towards the hard side of scifi, not the soft-like-an-overripe-banana" and "WAR IS BAD is a good message, but not the way YOU'RE writing it" and "jesus christ, evil Atlantian mutants who're going to rise up and take over the surface? TRANS-FREAKING-FORMERS DID THAT FIRST, AND YOU'RE ABOUT AS ANVILICIOUS."
So, yeah. Here's to hoping the next few suck less.
Also:
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Pitch ideas for Tobias at me plz.
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