Canine Conspiracy, continued.

[alabaster_demon]

*kowtows in apology for the ridiculous amount of time it took to update this*

Title: Canine Conspiracy (Chapter 1)
Rating: G
Summary: Skywarp makes his formal request (Skywarp? Formal?) and the puppy makes a new friend.

(Prologue)

Comments

[cmdrtekk]

Looking Good! Reads well. Still Fun.

[eerian_sadow]

well, you could get the chapters posted faster if you beta could remeber that she had beta work to do. (i totally spaced off another author's stuff, too. eerian=fail. thank gods october is done now.)

[alabaster_demon]

Eh, don't worry about it. *waves hand dismissively* You're already doing me a favor looking over these chapters, so there's no need for me to be selfish and demand it ASAP when I probably wouldn't have gotten around to putting it up anyway.

[kyra_neko_rei]

I like this. It's hilarious, cracky, and boy, do I love me some Megatron-Skywarp interaction. Not to mention the slapstick effects of Megatron crashing into the Seekers.

Motormaster, I brought you into this universe, and I can take you right back out!

I dare him to answer, "Yes, Mother."

[alabaster_demon]

You have no idea how relieved I am that someone thought this was funny. Humor isn't really my genre (I think) but this part just seemed to demand it.

And Motormaster isn't suicidal. Although I'm sure he'd have muttered it after Megatron had stormed out.

[kyra_neko_rei]

Motormaster is big, and Megatron, for all his threats, knows that if he takes Moto out, he loses Menasor. Although I'm sure he would take the excuse to beat some sense into Motormaster's head, possibly with a rock borrowed from Stonehenge, if not some explosives.

This concept reminds me of a SpringKink piece in which Grimlock made references to "Mama Ratchet."

[ink_in_hand]

This has to be said. I love your Swindle. Somehow I've become a Stunticon fan ever since I've joined up with the people part of the Transformer fandom. And your fic made me realize it just now.

You also have just the right amount of detail. Enough to give a clear idea of what's going on and still let the whole thing flow well.

[alabaster_demon]

*blinks* *scrolls up* That Swindle? The one I wrote about for less than five short paragraphs? *is happy that so little could make an impression*

And eeee! Positive feedback on actual writing style! *laps up comments greedily* Thank you!

[ink_in_hand]

It probably doesn't help that the first bunny from the farm to gnaw on me was a Motormaster one.

As for giving you constructive feedback, it's a habit I try to keep. Though it often runs away since not everyone is so open to crits. Even if I don't write, I am a heavy reader so I hope my opinion has some validation.

[drakesfyre]

Aaaaaaaaaw! BLUESTREAK!!!!! Whoo!