Due South fanfic - Backwards Psychology

Nov 06, 2009 23:20


Finished, just under the wire!

For the last day of karaokegal's Come As You're Not Halloween party, I present...

Title: Backwards Psychology
Author: Akuni
Universe: Due South
Genre: post-CotW, Romance, Drama, first time
Rating: R
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Spoilers: entire series
Word Count: 8115
Summary: Fraser and Dief are at odds, and Ray tries to help.

Disclaimer: I ( Read more... )

come as you're not, due south, fanfic, fraser/kowalski

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suchthefangirl November 14 2009, 19:34:06 UTC
Lots of fun! Found my way here though china_shop, and I'm so glad I did.

I loved how Dief Dief was, and Ray was spot on. I loved the slow realization of Ray's when he realized just what was going on.

Thank you. This was an excellent start to my day! I, too, hope you will write more due South stories, as good stories are always welcome!

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akuni November 14 2009, 19:54:40 UTC
Now that I've picked myself up off the floor after finding I've been recced (omg yay!!)... :D

I love a Diefy Dief. *grin* He's one of the most charming parts of the show, and I had a great deal of fun with him in this.

As soon as I've cleared my holiday obligations, I hope to pull more DS stories out of the mental soup. Thank you so much for reading, and commenting! I'm glad I could help you start your day right. :)

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mergatrude November 16 2009, 00:37:11 UTC
I loved this. I never get tired of Dief knowing what's going on before anyone else. I never get tired of watching them stumble their way into each other. I never get tired of messy couch sex! &hearts &hearts &hearts

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akuni November 16 2009, 18:25:43 UTC
Oh wonderful, thank you! I never get tired of Dief being extra clever, either. And who doesn't love messy couch sex?! \o/

(BTW I've been working through you DS fic mems for weeks - thank for compiling it, and wow for adding this to it! ♥)

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sam80853 December 3 2009, 04:20:03 UTC
This fills me with absolute glee. Awesome work!

You have Ray's voice down and Dief...oh, Dief...:)

Also - Welcome!

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akuni December 12 2009, 14:34:40 UTC
Thank you so much! I had a great time writing it, though I'm not sure how worried I should be that I'm so comfortable in Ray's head. ;p

(Sorry for the reply delay, LJ notification failures suck!)

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akuni August 8 2010, 13:35:11 UTC
Whee, I love getting this kind of comment!

I love the idea of Ray trying to communicate in Fraserese, and getting it right (possibly by accident). That line was one of the first stray thoughts that popped into my head when this fic was forming, and it made me laugh right out loud, so I knew I had to include it. :)

As for Dief, man, who could love dS and not get Dief being a proper character? He's got as much - if not more - personality than some of the other side characters. I freely admit this is a gratuitously Dief-heavy piece, because we love him and he's a fun tool to use in a story.

Thanks so much for your kind words, I'm going to be grinning all day. :) Plus, it was neat to re-read this story when it hit my inbox, and remember all the things I loved about it. I've been feeling like pulling out my DVDs again recently, too...

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