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Jul 06, 2008 02:33

detritus on table
diet Coke, loaf of white bread
box of pure sugar

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bobbymcr July 6 2008, 16:16:07 UTC
Your haiku has an extra syllable in the first line.

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akkmedk July 6 2008, 17:38:34 UTC
of course it does. I couldn't post after a six month long break without a ridiculous error in the first line.

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lakritze July 6 2008, 22:33:54 UTC
there is an entire book dedicated to zombie haiku

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ermac July 6 2008, 21:53:46 UTC
asshole!

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