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[akkmedk]

detritus on table
diet Coke, loaf of white bread
box of pure sugar

Comments

[bobbymcr]

Your haiku has an extra syllable in the first line.

[akkmedk]

of course it does. I couldn't post after a six month long break without a ridiculous error in the first line.

[lakritze]

there is an entire book dedicated to zombie haiku

[ermac]

asshole!

[bobbymcr]

Your haiku is missing numerous syllables.