The Faded First Love

[akinoyama]

Title: The faded first love

Entailed: the infinite light ~vast and shining~ [extra story-prologue]
Author: akinoyama 
Genre: Romance, fluff ???
Rating: PG-13
Words Count: 6,319Pairing: YabuMoto, YamaMoto, YabuHika, slight others
Summary: Ryuu told us we could forget our first love one day.
Warning: Un-betaed, terrible English and coherence as well, cross

Comments

[blozzom_zone]

First! Yay!

Maa, maa I couldn't believe no one commented to such a nice story yet ;/

well, I love it Ha-chan! YabuHika love's story from Ryu's point of view, kawaii...<3

It's just, one thing. Maybe you make it a little bit unclear about her love story with Ryo-chan, I mean, that should be the main story, right? It's like I want to know clearly how Ryu finally could fall for Ryo-chan? When he realized it and so on. Maybe because you love YabuHika too much like I do nee, so you're too focus with them??haha xDDD

I saw Hikaru was sleeping on the couch. I thought she was surely very tired for practice. I then saw Yabu approached her and sat beside her. He, at first, a bit hesitated to wake Hikaru by shaking her. Therefore, he simply placed his hand on Hikaru’s head and began tapped it. It was the first time I saw Yabu showed such action to Hikaru. He tapped Hikaru so lovingly and always smiled to her. I felt my heart twitched seeing it. Hikaru after five minutes opened her eyes, rubbing it a bit and smiled to Yabu, asking why he did

[akinoyama]

Yes, you're first... and I somewhat have guessed such thing would happened... therefore I'm not too surprised... But it's rarely you leave comment on the evening

[kawaiimaix3]

Kawaii story...more people should have commented though...

I was tearing up at many parts T___T

[akinoyama]

Thank you for the appreciatian... I don't really mind about not many people read it anyway...
Sorry for making you torn apart...
I suggest you to write the other stories which relate to it, namely First and Last Love [Hikaru's pov], Your True Love [Yabu's pov], Doushite kimi wo suki ni shimattan darou [Keito's pov] and The Waited Day as well which is the continuation. The rest of JUMP will appear as main pov in the future.
I hope you can read them if you have much free time.

[kawaiimaix3]

Oh I see, but I think when people comment it shows appreciation and that people loved the story.

I will try to read them as soon as possible. It's just that I'm not really fond of cross-dressing but I will make an exception to your stories !
And I hope I have free time too XP

[akinoyama]

Thank you for making the exception... I made it cross-dressing coz I want to see Hikaru wears a wedding dress... XDDDD