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akaipenguin

Of Lights, Zelo and Banghim

Jan 29, 2013 17:59

Title: Of Lights, Zelo and Banghim
Pairings: Banghim
Summary: Yongguk just didn't understand what Himchan wanted until a certain Light Fair came into the picture
Notes: banghim.... And Himchan's princess grumpy pouting is just damn cute... :3

( No I don't want to.... )

# banghim, % fluff, @ beast crossover, @ btob crossover

Comments 8

volatileflame January 30 2013, 14:27:59 UTC

this was such a cute story and the pictures are lovely!

akaipenguin February 1 2013, 09:29:09 UTC

the pictures were kind of blur actually... excuse my bad photography... OTL BUT THANKS FOR READING AND TAKING TIME TO COMMENT!! ^^

Ps: I LOVE YOUR DP!!! :3

blackheart_lies January 30 2013, 16:14:37 UTC

woah, seriously long!! but good!
the pictures are lovely :3

akaipenguin February 1 2013, 09:30:59 UTC

yeah... I KNOW RIGHT??! it was suppose to be like a short one shot but it ended up longer than i expected!! ><

the pictures are kind of blur actually.. excuse my bad photography.. OTL

BUT THANKS FOR READING AND TAKING TIME TO COMMENT!! ^^

<3

tcaramel February 4 2013, 04:57:36 UTC

I had to laugh when I tried to figure out what the comment button was! Your pictures are really pretty, someone spent a lot of time putting all those lights up!

I enjoyed that you added btob in your fic :D I like the light heartedness of your story and how Yongguk realizes his anger was stupid and redeems himself in the end (even though he says some pretty mean things)

my only suggestion for improvement is to go over your grammar tenses in the beginning and there's a couple words that are out of place. Like you have Collage instead of College (hehe just a little silly mistake that can be easily fixed in no time!)

akaipenguin February 5 2013, 07:47:22 UTC

hahahahhaahaha Smack Junhyung's butt was cause he kept smacking the rest of Beast's butts during their MIdnight Sun promo period... everyone got smacked by him~ XDDD

then the pictures... well the lights are just made with it... they're all originally made into shapes then they just plug in electric source and tadaaaaa it appears~ ^^ and really my pictures are pretty??? It was so blur and my sense of photography is just epic fail... OTL i shall improve!

I JUST HAD TO INCLUDE BTOB BECAUSE THE BOYS ARE JUST TOO CUTE! >< Yongguk is a pabo... he always is towards Himchan~ 8D and wellll... he did swear on national television so i just kinda got too excited with the argument~ XPP ( ... )

tcaramel February 5 2013, 15:22:10 UTC

It's mostly just that some of your sentences sound awkward and a few tenses are off

I have no idea about how to find a beta sorry! You could ask around people you know or look and see if there is beta posts somewhere in the general fic community

your photos are fine! I thought the lights were wrapped around some actual stuff too but yeah the small things would have to be formed by artificial stuffs

yes that is nicholas cage and his hair is a bird :D

akaipenguin February 6 2013, 09:16:39 UTC

Okay I'll take a note about the tenses and stuff... and probably do some vocab test or something... ><

and ouuuu it's okay then shall look around for Beta-s then~ ^^

I don't really know how it really looks like during the day but it's just a normal object with light bulbs sticking out of it when it doesn't have electricity flowing through~

wow... i didn't even notice the bird on his head if you didn't mention it.... O_O