Black and White

[ajin]

Title: black and white
Author: ajin
Pairing: Junhyung/Hyunseung
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, Romance, Angst
Word Count: 714
Summary: Junhyung is betrayed by the time.

Comments

[l4stw0rds]

You do have your own unique style, that's for sure.

...but I'm reveling in its freshness! I loves it~ even though HyunSeung wasn't in there much. He is a hard character to write, I'll be honest. It's almost like you caught his fleeting-ness, though.

Speaking of...my favorite lines:
"It feels like he has forever to memorize. Every eyelash and every laugh. It feels like he can just be still. Every word and every touch. It feels like the world has stopped and is waiting for him to catch up. He doesn’t want to move though so he remains stuck behind."

So freaking beautiful. Thanks for sharing, bb~ <3

[ajin]

Thank you! I'm alway worried that people will be put off by my writing style :/
I really feel like he's the only Beast member I can never get.

I'm really glad you enjoyed it~

[padmik]

whoa. just whoa.

i really love your style of writing! very unique.

and oh gosh, the ending was so 'wow' to me, so abrupt and head-on just like the way you wrote it. it's like i was snapped back to reality there. very beautiful; i really enjoyed it :)

[ajin]

Thank you so much!

That's exactly what I was going for. I'm so happy it got across^^

[izon_no_niwa]

ahhhhhhhhhhh *_______________*

Hyunseung is almost never there, eh? I like how you have to guess what could have happened. In real life, Hyunseung continues to be a little bit irrelevant at times, but when he makes his presence known, he sweeps you away. Damn. Somehow I could really empathize with Junhyung right now.

Also, I think what makes your work really refreshing and different (since I haven’t read any of yours and I read almost any JunSeung posted in the comm) is that I am free to build my own imagery to lay with your writing, since I am more visual-based than copy. And it’s wonderful because the ending for me is rather open, than an in-your-face I-don’t-love-you.

I hope you write more. No matter how sad or no matter how different, the world can do so much with more JunSeung written ^^

♥

[ajin]

IKR? I find him to be such a living contradiction. I decided to re-watch everything he was in starting from the Big Bang documentary. Maybe then I will actually be able to write him properly :/

I used to be very into Shinee. The only pairing I ever wrote before this was Ontae (and only twice.)
Hmmm...it wouldn't have been necessarily "I don't love you". More like "I can't wait forever". The ending is pretty personal though tbh XD

We'll see. Thank you so much for commenting^^

[izon_no_niwa]

But he is a living contradiction! Haha. I only finished MTV B2ST and B2ST Almighty, but he's my bias in the group, really. To the point that I don't understand why I like him because there's too many sides to him and sometimes he's nice and good but sometimes he can be a bitch. I watched one episode from the Big Bang documentary, the one for him, and I was a little disappointed and no wonder he was cut. I know he has it in him but sometimes I don't see if he has it all planned out like some of the members. But I still love him ._.

Idol Maid does not have my patience though |D

My favorite groups are SHINee and B2ST ^^

Seriously, JunSeungLand needs more writers! :)

[ajin]

That's what I think most of the time too. He is such a douche in Idol Maid :/ He spaces out more often than not too. And then I see him perform "Let it Snow" and my jaw is on the floor cause he is so sexy and he knows it.
Idol Maid is fun once you get past ep 2. I ended up loving it somehow >>

Right now mine too XD

[harkk]

What are you saying about not being worthy in the Junseung ship? I don't really ship them yet but I can tell this is some good writing!

Like what others had said, I really love the open-endedness of this fic. It leaves room for imagination and it has an artsy feel to it. Not sure if you'd understand that because I don't really get myself either. Heh. But seriously, this has room and potential to be developed into a masterpiece. I can feel it already. XD XD And no, I'm not trying to psycho you into turning this into a chaptered series or anything. I'm not. d:

I really liked how you brought in 'time' and the contrast of it during the meeting and the goodbye. It's subtle and overwhelming at the same time and I'm probably just reading too much but I still love it. (;

You just ignite my passion for fics again. You are good job. I'd be watching you like the creepy stalker I am. O__________O (this is supposed to look creepy)

[ajin]

Your comment kind of made me go like this:

[harkk]

Bouncing beast, always relevant. :D :D :D

Oh boooo. Ah wells, it's your story and even if it stays a one-shot, I still love it. (:

!! Wow, your encounter with that guy on the bus. Wonder what would happen if you did run after him though. I've never felt any attraction towards any random guy though. Well maybe except for one. There was this Nichkhun lookalike that boarded the train and I was so awe-struck that I accidentally followed him out of the train even though it wasn't my stop. D: Does this count?

And I'd like to stalk longer but it's 2:42am now and I've work in the morning tomorrow. Maybe I'd use work time to do my stalking instead. XD

[ajin]

Good^^
I dunno. Might have ended with awkward silence ;p Well, I've felt like I found the perfect guy. If you felt the same it does, I guess?

The time difference suggests that you might be from Singapore...go and get some sleep then!
who's talking >> it's almost 4 am here :/

[onjubong]

Did i tell you that i love your unique writing style? Did i?
Well i do, i absolutely love it and i missed it /sobs

I love how there are no names. You don't know who's the one feeling and thinking but then you read more and more and more... My heart was going like thump thump too lol It's sad, but it's beautiful. I always read your works like 3483576385765 times and i just keep reading them because they are so beautiful i'm just like

[ajin]

Oh bb, I love your comments. They're like sparkles and glitter in my life. You're so sweet <3

Omg, don't be a sad panda. It makes Beast cry too D: