story: good vs. evil

[aja_evenstar]

Title: Good vs. Evil
Author: aja_evenstar 
Warning/Rating: G
Word Count: 350
Summary: Neither is in play any longer.

A.N.// Written for a university task on microfiction. Pick a cliche theme and try to tell a new story. I wasn't sure if this was un-cliche, but i ended up liking what i wrote anyway.

Down below, men charge into battle for all that is good, raise

Comments

[tahirire]

I like this a lot. Very American Gods-ish. ;)

When the attrition is so high on both sides, nobody wins, it's true.

*worries*

[aja_evenstar]

Oh thankyou! Saying anything i do reminds you of Gaiman in the slightest is the greatest of compliments, haha. He seems to be the springboard for a lot of my writing lately *pondering glance*

[srchxandxdstry]

I thoroughly enjoyed this!

As I was reading it, I thought "Good" was meant to be "God"? So I read through it with that intention, and then I was like "... this doesn't make sense." Then I went back, and :| duh carlie, it's Good and Evil. I'm an idiot.

ON SECOND READING after I knew what was going on, I enjoyed it even more. And it definitely was a fresh take on a cliche kind of idea, of the whole ~war/battle/sides~ thing. I hope that's what it was. But I enjoyed it.

T for Troll effort. (LOL jk, I just have it in my head).

x

[aja_evenstar]

When i was writing it, i was concerned that people may think i meant "God", but i just hoped for the best haha. I'm glad you understood eventually. My works tend to fail upon first readings *sweatdrop face*

Thanks =D I'll take a T, just don't tell my parents =O (or Sam)